PLEASE REVIEW - Night Train - Audioprojek

13th Feb 2009 21:03 - 17 years ago
Description : A short piece while I learn about peaks and how to use some of this software

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give audioprojek some feedback.

Jazzyhap
Jazzyhap 14th Oct 2009 17:09 - 17 years ago
Your music is awesome, but is very very busy for the train beat. The way you introduced the beat is great, but the drum beat that comes in matches it, but doesn't enhance it in any way [very plain, generic]. Try to find something a little deeper that would create a stronger groove [hip hop maybe]. The keyboards are way too busy for this beat and is over powering it. Maybe towards the end of the song introduce it, after the groove is firmly established, start with small pieces. Even if you just introduced it with a 1/4, then half, none, then full.

Anyways, in no way am I saying it sounds bad, that is just the direction I would go with it.
audioprojek
audioprojek replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your feedback. Its great to hear when other people like my work. I haven't been on or editing in nearly a year, but hope to be back at making music (and editing track like this one based on the feedback I've received.) I built this one from scratch and made my own loops... after awhile, things can get lost in sound. I'm listening to track now and can hear the edits you suggested.
...I was going to listen to some your work, but it seems your list of music is a bit short. I hope to hear some of your stuff sometime.
Thanks again.
byb
byb 27th Mar 2009 18:26 - 17 years ago
i don't think you should really change anything for this track - the production, melody - all is in place really. mastering skills is something we should always progress on ))
audioprojek
audioprojek replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I appreciate your comments on this piece. I think Night Train is a little short though, but at the same time, the structure of it doesn't really lend itself to being repeated too long. I ran into a similar hurdle with 'better judgment', and managed to make it longer - although it too has some areas open for improvement. I have an ear infection right now - happy times - so my hearing is abit rubbish, and I have not done any work on my music nor commented on others - including yours. Give me some time and I'll listen to more of your music - last I listened to was Sunlit blvd... (great piece.) It just wouldn't be right to comment when I can't hear much at all. lol
Thanks again!
byb
byb 22nd Mar 2009 19:06 - 17 years ago
it gives the feeling of train - that's for sure
but... it's so dark that i can see the picture of train heading straight out of this world into some darker and distant place. it made me shiver - it's in a way scary and bears some uncomfortable feeling you can't easy forget. so i suppose that's what you wanted to achieve - and you've done it! production and melodies are great apart from that!
audioprojek
audioprojek replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
byb, thanks for the review. Its still a work in progress, although I've shelved it for awhile so I can work on improving my mastering skills - which are pretty limited right now.

I'm not promising to implement them, but what changes would you suggest?

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