Retro Vision - Xzysin

I think you were going for a lofi sound, but it kinda sounds like line noise in the beginning. I would turn down the bass kick a bit, it is clipping (you can see the top and bottom of the wave chopped off).
I like the breaks in the beat, very Aphex Twin.
You can turn the volume down a little on all the tracks, add a compressor on the master, and then turn the wet up a little, to get that hard bass without it washing out everything else when it hits (set a fast attack/release speed and about a 2DB knee). You could also just compress the kick and leave the rest alone, there are several different techniques.

This video thoroughly explains compression:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oOmX3JHwtE

Lots of new sounding ideas here, keep it up.