Description : EDIT June 2nd 2021: Replaced track with the 'remastered for Beat Saber' version.
Now a playable level in Beat Saber!

This is the second track of my Vocaloid album called: Acerbus 3.

Many thanks to LeoValentine1990 from looperman for specially singing on this track with many custom requests!

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  1. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Mon 11th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Awesome !!

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you! :)

  2. HeathAlexander
    HeathAlexander on Fri 8th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Henry and Crucethus are giving great advice. That transition at 1:02 is awesome. The music fits the vocals really well. The effects you have, especially in the outro, sound great. I like that you didn't overuse them. I'm excited to hear the final version.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you man! :D



  3. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Thu 7th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    This is absolutely! beauuutifulllll!! what a sublime!/unique track. EXCELLENT!! work here Eighteen. Love it.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you very much :)
    Yesterday I heared 3 of your songs and the melodies that you sing are fenominal!
    I cant reply to them so I am happy that I had a chance to tell u that! :)

    I liked all 3 of the songs if I am not mistaken.



  4. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Thu 7th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Oh man... so much upgrades but still audio quality lacks!

    "My version is so much better than yours" ahahahhahahahhaha

    Wait for tomorrow and get surprised!

    Reply by Eighteen

    Right where it hurts hahaha xD
    Yeah for sure next song will be less layers.

    And I've heard your song by now and yes I was frickin surpriced :p haha awesome man!

  5. Arloph09
    Arloph09 on Thu 7th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    for me it sounds syntpop ..and the mix is good too

    Reply by Eighteen

    Oh I didn't even know that was an actual genre!
    Yeah that name describes my work perfectly, most of the time :)



  6. ClickbaitCabaret
    ClickbaitCabaret on Thu 7th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Rather contemporary sounding pop song. Great job.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you :)
    Thanks for the listen!



  7. Pipello
    Pipello on Tue 5th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    I like the idea, I like the song... Perfect well done!

    Reply by Eighteen

    Much appreciated! ^^


  8. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Mon 4th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    I still like this, but still not satisfied about mix/mast too.


    Why don't you give me the vocals, so i can remix this?

    Reply by Eighteen

    No need to say sorry for feedback, feedback is what makes ppl better yes? :)

    Private mail send.


  9. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Sat 25th Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    Well, i give another chance on this just because i really like this song.

    Anyway, you didn't still get the right eq/comp/mix/mast.

    At the moment, i can't because of my hand injure, but i would like to make my remix of this, one day.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you for liking the song :)

    yeah I always have trouble with mixing a song if I have a lot of tracks in one project, specially this track the gets louder and louder near the end.

    One day I will get it I am sure :)

    Tnx for the feedback!



  10. Nodog
    Nodog on Sat 25th Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    super vocalist she is showcased well i enjoyed the track cheered me up in the middle of the corona madness peace out Robbie

    Reply by Eighteen

    Glad to hear that man, yeah sad times indeed



  11. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 23rd Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    I like this one, its quirky and fun has some eighties sensibilities. If you could inch the vox slightly down in the mix, and lower the reverb also a little bit as it drowns out the rest of the instruments. Bass is fine, need just a bit of warmth in the middle. It might also be the overdriven chiptune sounds that are also causing it all to sound clustered. I completely agree with henry as he is spot on with his original synopsis. This is a good tune worth the time it will take to get it perfect. I do really like it.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thanks for the feedback! :)
    I have changed this song a lot of times xD
    I am not sure if I can do a better job then what I have right now to be honest, the project has a loooot of tracks, different sounds and stuff, It was kinda hard to keep all of them 100% hearable.
    As far as my current skills can bring me, I think this is the max :)


  12. YungSedi
    YungSedi on Thu 23rd Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    Sounds very good, nice mix

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you! :D

  13. KnightHeir
    KnightHeir on Wed 22nd Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    Sounds very 90' rock imo, nice sound.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you man! :)

  14. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Wed 22nd Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    Nice work on the track.

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thanks Beatmaker! :)


  15. BaoBou
    BaoBou on Wed 22nd Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    I like it, it has a good flow to it. Well done!

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you man! :D

    Rijswijk de braafstuuuuh! XD


  16. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Mon 20th Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    Very nice idea, fantastic atmosphere created, the voice seems to come directly from the 80s, and more precisely from Patsy Kensit from Eight Wonder!

    Technically, however, there are several things to fix. First of all the eq of the volumes, the voice is too dominant and, as already written, too full of reverb. Despite using headphones of excellent quality such the I-phone ones, I do not hear the bass (the low frequencies generally), the drums are too weak. Maybe you could opt to saturate them if you don't want them to be too prominent.

    The general mix mastering should be reviewed, as your track is, however, has that vintage flavor that is definitely a positive aspect.

    I have not selected as a favorite just for the audio quality, but I believe you can do your best to improve it.

    Judging from this track, your album promises great things. I'd like to listen to it!

    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank you for your feedback,
    I too heard somethings that were not as they should be,
    but in the past few listened to it a loooooot of times, and
    I became a bit ''deaf'' to Eqs and basically everything.

    I have changed a lot so it sounds more how it should be in my opinion.

    Thanks man! and have a nice day!


  17. VirginiaSlimm
    VirginiaSlimm on Sun 19th Apr 2020 - 3 years ago

    I like it. I think there is a little too much reverb on the vocal. or if you want reverb really thick, you can duck the reverb to clear up the vocal and keep the lush long verbs. Very cool and original. The ending is tied up nicely.

    Reply by Eighteen

    I appreciate your feedback! :)
    I have cleaned up the song a bit as of now!

    Have a nice day!


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