02 Youll Be Alive Ft LeoValentine - Eighteen

19th Apr 2020 16:43 - 6 years ago
Description : EDIT June 2nd 2021: Replaced track with the 'remastered for Beat Saber' version.
Now a playable level in Beat Saber!

This is the second track of my Vocaloid album called: Acerbus 3.

Many thanks to LeoValentine1990 from looperman for specially singing on this track with many custom requests!

Comments (17)

If you have time take a listen and give Eighteen some feedback.

DijamMusic
DijamMusic 11th May 2020 16:55 - 6 years ago
Awesome !!
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 12th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you! :)
HeathAlexander
HeathAlexander 8th May 2020 17:30 - 6 years ago
Henry and Crucethus are giving great advice. That transition at 1:02 is awesome. The music fits the vocals really well. The effects you have, especially in the outro, sound great. I like that you didn't overuse them. I'm excited to hear the final version.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 11th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you man! :D

Cheers!

~Eighteen
Angelyeux777
Angelyeux777 7th May 2020 21:31 - 6 years ago
This is absolutely! beauuutifulllll!! what a sublime!/unique track. EXCELLENT!! work here Eighteen. Love it.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 8th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you very much :)
Yesterday I heared 3 of your songs and the melodies that you sing are fenominal!
I cant reply to them so I am happy that I had a chance to tell u that! :)

I liked all 3 of the songs if I am not mistaken.

Cheers!

~Eighteen
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 7th May 2020 20:17 - 6 years ago
Oh man... so much upgrades but still audio quality lacks!

"My version is so much better than yours" ahahahhahahahhaha

Wait for tomorrow and get surprised!
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 8th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Right where it hurts hahaha xD
Yeah for sure next song will be less layers.

And I've heard your song by now and yes I was frickin surpriced :p haha awesome man!
JCJMusic
JCJMusic 7th May 2020 17:55 - 6 years ago
for me it sounds syntpop ..and the mix is good too
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 7th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Oh I didn't even know that was an actual genre!
Yeah that name describes my work perfectly, most of the time :)

Thanks!

~Eighteen
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 7th May 2020 17:45 - 6 years ago
Rather contemporary sounding pop song. Great job.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 7th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you :)
Thanks for the listen!

Cheers!

~Eighteen
Pipello
Pipello 5th May 2020 12:02 - 6 years ago
I like the idea, I like the song... Perfect well done!
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 7th May 2020 - 6 years ago
Much appreciated! ^^

~Eighteen
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 4th May 2020 10:55 - 6 years ago
I still like this, but still not satisfied about mix/mast too.

Sorry.

Why don't you give me the vocals, so i can remix this?
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 5th May 2020 - 6 years ago
No need to say sorry for feedback, feedback is what makes ppl better yes? :)

Private mail send.

~Eighteen
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 25th Apr 2020 09:20 - 6 years ago
Well, i give another chance on this just because i really like this song.

Anyway, you didn't still get the right eq/comp/mix/mast.

At the moment, i can't because of my hand injure, but i would like to make my remix of this, one day.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 28th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you for liking the song :)

yeah I always have trouble with mixing a song if I have a lot of tracks in one project, specially this track the gets louder and louder near the end.

One day I will get it I am sure :)

Tnx for the feedback!

Cheers!

~Eighteen
Nodog
Nodog 25th Apr 2020 06:35 - 6 years ago
super vocalist she is showcased well i enjoyed the track cheered me up in the middle of the corona madness peace out Robbie
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 28th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Glad to hear that man, yeah sad times indeed

Cheers!

~Eighteen
crucethus
crucethus 23rd Apr 2020 07:04 - 6 years ago
I like this one, it´s quirky and fun has some eighties sensibilities. If you could inch the vox slightly down in the mix, and lower the reverb also a little bit as it drowns out the rest of the instruments. Bass is fine, need just a bit of warmth in the middle. It might also be the overdriven chiptune sounds that are also causing it all to sound clustered. I completely agree with henry as he is spot on with his original synopsis. This is a good tune worth the time it will take to get it perfect. I do really like it.
Cro
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 24th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks for the feedback! :)
I have changed this song a lot of times xD
I am not sure if I can do a better job then what I have right now to be honest, the project has a loooot of tracks, different sounds and stuff, It was kinda hard to keep all of them 100% hearable.
As far as my current skills can bring me, I think this is the max :)

~Eighteen
YungSedi
YungSedi 23rd Apr 2020 04:23 - 6 years ago
Sounds very good, nice mix
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 24th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you! :D
Art0fficial
Art0fficial 22nd Apr 2020 19:26 - 6 years ago
Sounds very 90' rock imo, nice sound.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 24th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you man! :)
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 22nd Apr 2020 15:35 - 6 years ago
Nice work on the track.
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 22nd Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thanks Beatmaker! :)

~Eighteen
BaoBou
BaoBou 22nd Apr 2020 06:39 - 6 years ago
I like it, it has a good flow to it. Well done!
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 22nd Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you man! :D

Rijswijk de braafstuuuuh! XD

~Eighteen
HenryPascal
HenryPascal 20th Apr 2020 00:43 - 6 years ago
Very nice idea, fantastic atmosphere created, the voice seems to come directly from the 80s, and more precisely from Patsy Kensit from Eight Wonder!

Technically, however, there are several things to fix. First of all the eq of the volumes, the voice is too dominant and, as already written, too full of reverb. Despite using headphones of excellent quality such the I-phone ones, I do not hear the bass (the low frequencies generally), the drums are too weak. Maybe you could opt to saturate them if you don't want them to be too prominent.

The general mix mastering should be reviewed, as your track is, however, has that vintage flavor that is definitely a positive aspect.

I have not selected as a favorite just for the audio quality, but I believe you can do your best to improve it.

Judging from this track, your album promises great things. I'd like to listen to it!
Eighteen
Eighteen replied 20th Apr 2020 - 6 years ago
Thank you for your feedback,
I too heard somethings that were not as they should be,
but in the past few listened to it a loooooot of times, and
I became a bit ''deaf'' to Eqs and basically everything.

I have changed a lot so it sounds more how it should be in my opinion.

Thanks man! and have a nice day!

~Eighteen
BCVProductions
BCVProductions 19th Apr 2020 19:33 - 6 years ago
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