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Description : I posted a track at the beginning of last year and I mentioned I'm really working on sharpening up my delivery, vocals and melodies. This is like my 3rd track I've posted on here (but I did a few others as well), please let me know how you think this one came out. Thank you.

A video idea based off the songs name came to me, please check it out youtube.com/watch?v=vBegdbWDj-M

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  1. JoeyBonezSD1
    JoeyBonezSD1 on Sat 14th Nov 2020 - 3 years ago

    all around dope track.flow and dilivery nice.last part of the track.lol,was dope..nice work man..did listen to your other joints aswell..great music man!respect...

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thank you fam, that's much appreciated!
    I'mma go check out your music too, the first one I heard was dope!

  2. engomade
    engomade on Thu 5th Mar 2020 - 4 years ago

    Bro that's nice work keep going. I listen also to ure other songs and I'm realy impressed. When u need a beat youre welcome.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks bro, I'mma take a screenshot of this comment for when I hit you up lol.

  3. tsochai
    tsochai on Fri 14th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    so fuckin fire!!!!
    love the vocals floating thru
    dope work
    -CAP

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks bro, much appreciated.

  4. JohnyBBeats
    JohnyBBeats on Fri 14th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    The quality, flow, and message really are all on point man, did you make this beat yourself as well? Well done sir. I have plenty of beats laying around for free by the way if you are interested o.o

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Oh please, I make beats but I haven't done something like that, at least not yet. But thank you and I'll definitely check out your beats.

  5. elijahbcrouch
    elijahbcrouch on Sat 8th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    a couple flaws but its really great!

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Yeah for sure, it's not perfect but I'm just working on getting it to sound better, but glad to hear you liked it. Thanks.

  6. RICBS
    RICBS on Sat 8th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    What a vibe, you have such a great voice! i loved it, keep up the good work mate

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks bro, for sure I felt that vibe as soon as I heard the beat and it was a wrap lol.

  7. Verdiqo
    Verdiqo on Wed 5th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    Greetings,

    Now this was prety pleasant to listen to. loved the melodie and also loved the lyrics to it as well. So yeah a prety solid track indeed. Next time try mixing it down a bit more to get a even more balanced like track. But yeah i digged it. So well done. Keep on creating & listening. And have a good one, Verdi

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Yes, I didn't realize till a few years back how important mixing is to any record just to get it to sound right. Nowadays mixing is one thing I'm trying to focus on and trying to find engineers to get the right mix.

    But glad to hear you liked it and thank you for the feedback.

  8. SliMusic
    SliMusic on Tue 4th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    This is a banger, but turn the vocals down, like, 6 dbs. Its a bit too harsh on my ears with these headphones lol good work tho

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    lol bro, you're probably using in ear headphones right? If you're listening with something bigger that has more bass it might not be that sharp. But thanks tho.

  9. dubjoka
    dubjoka on Tue 4th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    this is dope af bro great work

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    thank you bro.

  10. MichaelMayo
    MichaelMayo on Tue 4th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    Hey on paper I love the idea but you lost me at the flow and the lyrics are too harsh. I know the feeling cause on one of my songs I had release a few years back was a message about haterz but it crossed that line of too angry. So the first lyrics were alittle bit harsh

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Michael! Thank you so much for bring up the content, that was the one thing I wrestled with the whole time.

    That's why I intentionally put in lyrics like
    "...that deserved an lol...I just be playing I'm sure you can tell..." then I ended the bridge on a softer note after that 2nd verse.
    Like'if I made a budget with my schedule you won't get any days' lol, that's such a weak diss, if anything I was hoping it wasn't too mushy.

    But again good observation, it really wasn't a "hater" message it was just a fun idea I came up as the name of the instrumental on YouTube is "Heart" so I thought Heart Emoji.

    PS: this is just part 1 or a 2 part series I'm doing for valentines day, the 2nd one is much more all the way "mushy" but it's supposed to be for valentines day so it makes sense.

    Sorry about the paragraphs and essays man, that question is something I legit thought about so I got excited when I saw your comment. Thanks for your feedback!

  11. flxbeats
    flxbeats on Tue 4th Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    great voice mate, lets link on soundcloud if you interested

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    For sure bro, I'm looking for these kinds of beats that have a great melody to them cause I do the raps but I really really enjoy coming up with the melodies and the hooks just as much, if not more.

    https://soundcloud.com/thefemifactor
    What's yours?

  12. SpeakUpProd
    SpeakUpProd on Sun 2nd Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    its outstanding on point!

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    thank you, much appreciated.

  13. Frostdog
    Frostdog on Sun 2nd Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    nice work bro

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    thanks bro

  14. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Sun 2nd Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    This is one of the hottest tracks I have heard on here bro..really nice work.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thanks man, much appreciated.

  15. KnightHeir
    KnightHeir on Sun 2nd Feb 2020 - 4 years ago

    Everything sounds good bro.

    TheFemiFactor
    Reply by TheFemiFactor

    Thank you bro

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