Description : Just a teenage kid trying have fun and make music. Welcome to any and all feedback.

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  1. Jeff88lima
    Jeff88lima on Mon 15th Jul 2019 - 2 months ago

    wooww

    christhagod
    Reply by christhagod

    Thank You :)

  2. EvenIll
    EvenIll on Thu 11th Jul 2019 - 2 months ago

    Love the melody and love the voice but it does sound a bit quiet. Keep it up though!

    christhagod
    Reply by christhagod

    Thank you for the feedback. I’ll take your thoughts into consideration.

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Constantly tender from dismal moments
And I have no clue
Why I’m down with the blues
Please don’t be resentful or annoyed
Don’t perceive this as an insult
Our fondness is lethal
And I’m only mortal
I’m not ignoring you
Believe me madam I adore you
But there’s an 11 - 17% chance
That we’ll live separate, one day
If we get hitched
No

Poised upon my tippy toes
I’m looking for you
Graceful and elegant
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
Till you mess with her food

Poised upon my tippy toes
I’m looking for you
Graceful and elegant
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
Till you mess with her food

Silhouettes of what we use to have
Shit just never ever last
Silhouettes of what we use to have
Shit just never ever lasts forever

I approach you, calm and panache
Smelling like liquor and trash
Exclaimed that I loved you with gusto
You said you ain’t know
If you want me
At the moment right now
You prominently stand out with èclat
Baby girl I can’t let you go
Your filled with elan and enthusiasm
Yes you are bad for me, but I’m so addicted to you
You are my uppers and downers
You drown the sound out when shit gets louder
And I’m sorry
I don’t mean to cower behind you
You just make me feel complete inside
In my life
Thank you

Poised upon my tippy toes looking for you
Graceful and elegant
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
Till you mess with her food

Poised upon my tippy toes
I’m looking for you
Graceful and elegant
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
Till you mess with her food

Poised upon my tippy toes
(Silhouettes of what we use to have)
I’m looking for you
(Shit just never ever last)
Graceful and elegant
(Silhouettes of what we use to have)
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
(Shit just never ever lasts forever)
Till you mess with her food

Poised upon my tippy toes
(Silhouettes of what we use to have)
I’m looking for you
(Shit just never ever last)
Graceful and elegant
(Silhouettes of what we use to have)
I’m searching for you
Polite with good manners
(Shit just never ever lasts forever)
Till you mess with her food

Silhouettes of what we use to have
Shit just never ever lasts
Silhouettes of what we use to have
Shit just never ever lasts forever

 


 

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