Tags : | Pop | 7.93 MB | Featured | Reaper

Description : A song a wrote for my wife, I sang and played all of the instruments. If you like the track feel free to download it. Let me know if you hear anything out of balance.

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  1. JennaEvans
    JennaEvans on Thu 7th Feb 2019 - 11 months ago

    I love the lyrics, I love a song that reflect true life. Great track

  2. Someonenew
    Someonenew on Mon 4th Feb 2019 - 11 months ago

    Really good.. but the vocals should be louder.
    (Y)

  3. nln1
    nln1 on Mon 4th Feb 2019 - 11 months ago

    I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better

    ImproveWithError
    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks for the listen, I will look into the vocals.

  4. royalnation
    royalnation on Sun 3rd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    I liked the drum track. For me, that kept the song strong.

    ImproveWithError
    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks for checking out the track.

  5. mildperil
    mildperil on Sun 3rd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    Awesome song, love it. I'm blown away by the fact that you also play all the instruments.

    Only thing I would like more of is to hear your voice cutting through the mix, you've got a great voice with a real nice tone, and feel that it should be more prominent in the song.

    Other than that, thanks for sharing :)

  6. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Sun 3rd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    Kyle! Wow man. This is great. Sounds like a commercial song to me that belongs on the radio or something man. You really need an agent Kyle that can push you out there to get discovered. Awesome vocals, the instruments are sweet, the arrangement is masterful, the lyrics have place and purpose. Overall, the performance and presentation gets 5 stars out of 5 stars. Well done. I am a music lover or many genres, and so I must say, you did a awesome job with this one Kyle!

    Joe

    ImproveWithError
    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks Joe I appreciate your comments and thanks for the fav and download. I don't get a lot of time to write and record these days so its nice to hear positive feedback. Writing songs has been a fun hobby for years and a great stress reliever. Thanks again!

    Kyle

  7. danke
    danke on Sat 2nd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    incredible hit single :-)

    but really, you created an outstanding song for every pop chart...(damon is right)

    only 1 thing: you should change the hihat for cymbals to the chorus (from 0.07 and later) gives more power and groovy for that part...

    standing ovation, Danke

    ImproveWithError
    Reply by ImproveWithError

    danke, thanks for the listen and the comments, I appreciate it. I will look into the hats when I get a chance.

    Kyle

  8. damonb
    damonb on Sat 2nd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    your genre is pop and you blow ay a lot of pop on here now you know your grnre doit

    ImproveWithError
    Reply by ImproveWithError

    Thanks for the the tip!

  9. damonb
    damonb on Sat 2nd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    when you put this in pop genre give any one els a comment so you can pull ahead of me on list of tracks ill back off let your new track grow a bit nice stuff

  10. damonb
    damonb on Sat 2nd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    listened 2 times now good stuff defo pop music

  11. damonb
    damonb on Sat 2nd Feb 2019 - 12 months ago

    your cheating your self putting this in the genre ambient altho your using an ambient pad that's very strong in your song put this song in pop catgory it will do better

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