Listen To Dont Say It Pop Song By Kirstin At Looperman.com

Yes, you should definitely work on this track, Kirstin. I like where it is going. And, I think the drum part works great.

I do think I'm hearing a bit of a pattern in your tracks where piano and strings predominate in the instrumental backing. You do them both very well. But, I'd encourage you, as your work on this track, to swap them both out for different instruments so you get more variety and range in the tracks.

On my own tracks, most of which I never finish and definitely never post here or anyplace, I often start with keys (usually Keyscape) to work out the chord progressions. Sometimes I keep those parts with the electric or acoustic instruments, but I try to force myself to experiment with other plugins and I will often apply an LFO effects plugin (basically an automated filter) to add movement to what might otherwise just be a series of chords.

You use a lot of arpeggios, which has somewhat the same effect and works very nicely. I think your keyboard chops are much better than mine! :)

Eric

You need to finish this ASAP!

-1trn