Description : I wrote this a long time ago before I got sick in 2012.

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  1. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Sat 26th Jan 2019 - 2 years ago

    A really good track Kristin. Very good melody line. Has surprises in where it goes, which is really nice.

    I think the instrumental backing is kind of busy, or perhaps it just needs to be mixed differently. I thought the vocal worked very well generally. There were a couple of places where you added a little touch that made it really special. That's what I'd like to hear more of, because it is clear that you can do it.

    I feel that the mix is missing a bottom end. Your bass line is set up more in the middle of the frequency spectrum. I would experiment adding one or more layered bass parts to balance the sound more. You can use an EQ on each bass instrument, cutting the frequencies that you don't want from it, to focus each instrument on a specific range of the frequency spectrum so the whole thing doesn't get muddy. Route them all to a bass bus. If your DAW has a bass enhancing effects plugin, experiment with that as well. I often use Lowender, but there are others.

    Generally, to my ears, the instrumental backing is working the same frequency range as your vocal. And because it has a lot going on, it is competing for attention. I'd look at adjusting the levels and probably automating gain changes on the vocals bus vs. the instruments buses.

    If you aren't routing the individual tracks in your DAW to separate mix busses, I would recommend experimenting with that and applying compression and EQ on the busses.

    You have a lot more to offer than vocals and lyrics. I'm impressed.

    Eric

    Eric

  2. hobertni
    hobertni on Fri 2nd Nov 2018 - 2 years ago

    Damn you have a good voice. If you are down, I would love to make a EDM/Trap remix if you sent me the vocals for this

    Kirstin
    Reply by Kirstin

    That would be amazing! What all do I need to send you?

  3. OMaille
    OMaille on Fri 2nd Nov 2018 - 2 years ago

    Wow. Very soulful and powerful voice!

  4. Alien
    Alien on Thu 1st Nov 2018 - 2 years ago

    Wow, this is absolutely PRO on all levels. Great job.

    Kirstin
    Reply by Kirstin

    Thank you so much!

  5. RuslanG
    RuslanG on Fri 26th Oct 2018 - 2 years ago

    Nice!

  6. Modnex
    Modnex on Fri 26th Oct 2018 - 2 years ago

    Great work here. The vocals really stand out on this one. Everything sounds mixed down well and the instrumental is great. All in all, outstanding work. I look forward to hearing more of your work in the future.

    Kirstin
    Reply by Kirstin

    Thanks, I appreciate your comments!

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