Description : plz tell me what u think. i wanna know people's opinions on this song.
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Im going to be like Simon whatever his name is on that TV show and say that it needs a lot of work!! you have just one drone instrument playing a repetitive motif and there is no melody. I cannot feel a beat, I don't even know what the time signature is.
I agree with the commenter above. I loved the end from the 1:00 min mark the sustained chord sounds cool. I see you asked somewhere if you should give up. If you enjoy it, don't. Music takes practice, it's work but it is rewarding. I practice hours a day and should be better than I am but it has become a part of who I am. I could never give it up. And for some forms you are more restricted by your equipment but that is pretty easily remedied these days. Good luck!!
I think the intro needs more variation. It goes on for too long and becomes repetitive really quickly. I would suggest adding some percussion or perhaps another synth to make it more interesting.
The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
I appreciate the support, but it wasn't me who said I wanna give up music, I just commented on that thread. I'm glad that u like the song, though!
The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.