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15th Sep 2018 20:02 - 6 years ago
Description : plz tell me what u think. i wanna know people's opinions on this song.

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If you have time take a listen and give bennycauthen some feedback.

RonMeredith
RonMeredith 28th Sep 2018 00:25 - 6 years ago
Im going to be like Simon whatever his name is on that TV show and say that it needs a lot of work!! you have just one drone instrument playing a repetitive motif and there is no melody. I cannot feel a beat, I don't even know what the time signature is.
DONJUEN69
DONJUEN69 27th Sep 2018 19:14 - 6 years ago
NEEDS A BEAT INVITE ME IN TO FORUM
Rexsaw
Rexsaw 20th Sep 2018 01:30 - 6 years ago
This track drags and has no climax.
bennycauthen
bennycauthen replied 26th Sep 2018 - 6 years ago
well, personally, i think the end part which starts around the 0:56 mark is the climax, but thanks for the opinion.
BORNTOPUN
BORNTOPUN 16th Sep 2018 22:39 - 6 years ago
I agree with the commenter above. I loved the end from the 1:00 min mark the sustained chord sounds cool. I see you asked somewhere if you should give up. If you enjoy it, don't. Music takes practice, it's work but it is rewarding. I practice hours a day and should be better than I am but it has become a part of who I am. I could never give it up. And for some forms you are more restricted by your equipment but that is pretty easily remedied these days. Good luck!!
bennycauthen
bennycauthen replied 18th Sep 2018 - 6 years ago
Thanks a lot for the positive feedback!!

I appreciate the support, but it wasn't me who said I wanna give up music, I just commented on that thread. I'm glad that u like the song, though!
Modnex
Modnex 15th Sep 2018 20:54 - 6 years ago
I think the intro needs more variation. It goes on for too long and becomes repetitive really quickly. I would suggest adding some percussion or perhaps another synth to make it more interesting.

The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.

Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.
bennycauthen
bennycauthen replied 16th Sep 2018 - 6 years ago
thanks a lot! I really appreciate the advice!

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