Mountains We Linger On - Cyborgnyc

30th Apr 2018 02:40 - 8 years ago
Description : Very interested in your comments! Good or bad.

Still sussing out my mixes. Learning how to use synths, make beats and need production help (mixing). Guess I was inspired by the Abba reunion.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give cyborgnyc some feedback.

VenaDriX
VenaDriX 2nd May 2018 15:45 - 8 years ago
REALLY Like unique Melody/ Style & CAN U PLEASE SEND ME OR POST THE *FULL/ ENTIRE LYRICS*?! VERY UpLifting! Thanks
cyborgnyc
cyborgnyc replied 2nd May 2018 - 8 years ago
Thanks! Could really use more help mixing and finding sounds. Still learning.

MOUNTAINS - (We Linger)



Wide awake alone in the middle of the night preoccupied with the uncertainty of light
Linger on a memory of you and I and the mountains that we used to climb (we come alive)

All the walls we build of our design visible the universe we defined
Hold my heart my face between your hands (divine) until our paths become aligned/entwined

We linger on, the mountains - we used to climb -- we linger

Take a chance on being who you are authentic be it plain (or just) bizarre
Let the world -- see just how you shine, you are unique and you are fine

Old beliefs-- that might hold you back are windows made to break, until
you find the beauty that shines through meanings you’ll fulfill

We linger, the mountains….we used to climb, we linger

We are climbing higher, higher...stars below us… find us oh divine...

Wide awake alone in the middle of the night, preoccupied about the dawn
And the uncertainty of light I linger on the memory of mountains that we’ve climbed
And rage against the walls of glass beside us as we fight to find the opening to take us
Through this life
EricMilligan
EricMilligan 30th Apr 2018 04:11 - 8 years ago
I agree with Ed (Tumbleweed). Track has a nice feel to it. I like your melody ideas a lot. Definitely evokes Abba. I happen to like Abba. Instrumental backing needs work. Needs a good bass part to set the foundation. Generally, it has too much going on in the high frequency range and it competes with the vocals. Also, the various instruments aren't really distinct in the mix. I think this is partly a question of how the mix has been constructed, but also might be attributable to the arrangement.

The track has a lot of promise, actually. I think you have an ear for melody. That's really important.

Eric
cyborgnyc
cyborgnyc replied 30th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Nice to get props for my melody. Yeah, I hear what you mean about too much going on ht high-frequency range. Still learning how to mix. It's SO complicated to know where to place things and I've been listening to music for a long time but mixing is a different beast than writing/singing etc.!
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 30th Apr 2018 03:25 - 8 years ago
Hey cyborgnyc....nice bouncy dance track...could use some bass....keep it going...Ed
cyborgnyc
cyborgnyc replied 30th Apr 2018 - 8 years ago
Thanks, I think there is some bass, but probably not cutting through. Still learning how to mix (and find good sounds in the thousands of presets on Helix etc.) I appreicate your taking the time to comment!

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