Tags : | Rap | 8.67 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : i posted this track in it's infant stages, and i'd like to share, what i think is a finished product. the Cello is a loop i found on here when i first joined LM and i've been sitting on it, trying to figure out how to use it in a hip hop track until now. I wish i remembered who posted the Cello loop so i can thank them. i also added the lyrics for anyone who wants to check them out.

i'm looking for feedback on the track to make me a better producer, as well as lyricist. thanks for listening.

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  1. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Wed 5th Jul 2017 - 2 years ago

    I see you still got that flow...good work bro.

    wordybum
    Reply by wordybum

    thanks brother. ive been writing a ton of new stuff. im trying to get a release done by the end of Autumn. i'll keep you posted and, of course, post tracks here.

  2. hemant37
    hemant37 on Tue 4th Jul 2017 - 2 years ago

    Your mix has a lot of dynamic range meaning the difference between the highest and lowest volume elements.It's good to have a decent amount of dynamic range. When you compress it the difference becomes less so your mix becomes louder and the low volume elements comeout.You can see the waveform of songs made by professionals and then probably you will be able to better understand what i was saying.Panning certain elements is also one option for mixing. But that entirely depends on you.

    I am no pro at mixing and mastering but I have understand some stuff so i just told what i thought. Hope it helped.

  3. hemant37
    hemant37 on Tue 4th Jul 2017 - 2 years ago

    it's a decent track some elements don't come out as they should maybe a better mixing and mastering can make it a better track. i don't like the awkward silence around 2:22 and the ending I don't think there is a need to just slowly decrease the volume and end the track.

    wordybum
    Reply by wordybum

    thats so much. the silence between the verses was meant to have some spoken word, but it never came to me. i was thinking of messing with some movie or spoken word samples and see what comes of it. what do you suggest, as far as bringing out certain elements within the mix?

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rom the beginning i was different breed - i lived in the shadow of dreams
broke out from the shadow of destiny and stepped to the shadow of kings
ready to astonish - with an accomplishment that had never been seen
no compass needed as an accomplice on this - yet my direction was keen

i never dreamed i’d be the resurrector of this reverent scene
an architect building a blueprint to induce a intricate scheme
i’m fitting to be the king but heavy hangs the head who has seen
that the sinking ship that they man is man down and finally and losing its steam

no other options - i gotta rock this - i gotta stomp on their conscience
mop obsolete - processes - constantly
they tried to admonish my vision of peace
abolish my mission by any means necessary or so it seemed

they said a species reflective of me was a fallacy
a sick step on the balance beam that balances everything
and challenges all that they ever knew
while all i know are challenges that outweigh the balance they talk of as they refuse to move
so I lock out the toxic and obvious options that toppled the prophets and all of their thoughts and views

i’ve been up - so high up in the clouds -
that to see eye to eye with the sun is too look down
and i refuse to be nothing more than the muse
so i muse on my views and make moves through the blue
hue

it lies steadily - lives heavily lace the plains
like heavenly rain as i display game changing effortless ways
to spark change in their minds -
but it endlessly goes back to the same over time

so if its the same over time am i brave or benign -
am i just another crease let released on the timeline?
it’s a fine line walked - and walked long before
i happened upon this proverbial fork in the road and decided to go forth with the songs of lore

way beyond creation i was innovating time space with elation - left the universe gaping draped in mystery and amazement
My fellow statesmen were pacing in figure eights impatiently waiting to see how much i could hold up and how far i could take it
they were merely replacements - awaiting their placement - as my creation kept getting baited with my beauty & greatness

this is more than the dust of the earth which was born from the crust and the core -
this is more than the ways that i paved to make sure they could further explore
there were so many variables - so many things that i could have ignored
so many lost opportunities held back - i should have done more

and yet… they stay blessed in the sense that i’m god I will save or ensalve in a breath

 


 

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