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Tags : | Rap | 8.67 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : i posted this track in it's infant stages, and i'd like to share, what i think is a finished product. the Cello is a loop i found on here when i first joined LM and i've been sitting on it, trying to figure out how to use it in a hip hop track until now. I wish i remembered who posted the Cello loop so i can thank them. i also added the lyrics for anyone who wants to check them out.

i'm looking for feedback on the track to make me a better producer, as well as lyricist. thanks for listening.

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  1. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Wed 5th Jul 2017 - 6 years ago

    I see you still got that flow...good work bro.

    wordybum
    Reply by wordybum

    thanks brother. ive been writing a ton of new stuff. im trying to get a release done by the end of Autumn. i'll keep you posted and, of course, post tracks here.

  2. hemant37
    hemant37 on Tue 4th Jul 2017 - 6 years ago

    Your mix has a lot of dynamic range meaning the difference between the highest and lowest volume elements.It's good to have a decent amount of dynamic range. When you compress it the difference becomes less so your mix becomes louder and the low volume elements comeout.You can see the waveform of songs made by professionals and then probably you will be able to better understand what i was saying.Panning certain elements is also one option for mixing. But that entirely depends on you.

    I am no pro at mixing and mastering but I have understand some stuff so i just told what i thought. Hope it helped.

  3. hemant37
    hemant37 on Tue 4th Jul 2017 - 6 years ago

    it's a decent track some elements don't come out as they should maybe a better mixing and mastering can make it a better track. i don't like the awkward silence around 2:22 and the ending I don't think there is a need to just slowly decrease the volume and end the track.

    wordybum
    Reply by wordybum

    thats so much. the silence between the verses was meant to have some spoken word, but it never came to me. i was thinking of messing with some movie or spoken word samples and see what comes of it. what do you suggest, as far as bringing out certain elements within the mix?

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