Tags : | Rap | 8.69 MB | Adult Content

Description : a remix with original music. looking for feedback

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  1. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Sun 20th Nov 2016 - 5 years ago

    Hey Mike..digging this man, I quite like the slightly distorted vocals actually, they lend a television drama series backing track vibe, it's got that dark feel very film noir, your bridging the gap man between rock, rap and contemporary flair, it's also interesting to note that while some have found the filtered vocals not quite clear enough it's always a question of what particular sound fits any given groove and in this case it dovetails in nicely....great word a second flow as per usual big thumbs up mate...cheers Dave

    Reply by wordybum

    I had full intentions of using the distortion on my vocals for this track when i started writing the music for it. the original vocals are much different, but this acapella just 'fit' with the track so well that i left it. I think the biggest issue with the filtered vocals is that i AM spitting a word a second and some people will have to go back a few times to hear what i'm saying. i see that as a good thing. these words should be heard a few times to let them all resonate. i was thinking of writing an entire EP using this 'band' that i created for this track. what do you think?

  2. cologneandy
    cologneandy on Sun 20th Nov 2016 - 5 years ago

    Not my usualy kind of music but i really like it and from a side of someone whos no expert i can hear no mistake inside at any place ..reminds me in some parts at blur song 2

    Reply by wordybum

    thanks so much for the listen and the feedback!

  3. CorruptionEDM
    CorruptionEDM on Sun 20th Nov 2016 - 5 years ago

    The subbass layers seem a bit conflicting, like they are a little too rumbly. Not sure why that is, but once that is fixed, I can't find much more criticism on the mixdown. Of course, if it were me, I would have had the lyrics a little clearer, but your mic may not be of a high enough quality so going with the distorted effect may have been a good choice!

    Reply by wordybum

    thanks for the feedback, brother. i have sub bass on the kick, the whole track and the bass line. what do you think i should take out or adjust?

  4. igorsamanski
    igorsamanski on Sun 20th Nov 2016 - 5 years ago

    This sounds like Kid Rock, or Monster Magnet, maybe if you want to make it commercial you need a catchy hook with a chorus, both the music and rap are good quality

    Reply by wordybum

    thanks for the great feedback!

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