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Description : Looking for someone to add a 3rd verse and/or hook!

Beat was made by White Slicer Music (https://soundcloud.com/whiteslicer)

Check him out, has alot of nice and different kinds of sounds like this track.

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  1. acesmith
    acesmith on Sat 15th Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    Oh, I probably should have clarified I'm going for hook and third verse.

  2. acesmith
    acesmith on Sat 15th Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    Hey who's the second artist? It's probably in my best interest to know :P

  3. BillionaireExclusive
    BillionaireExclusive on Wed 12th Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    Very inspirational lyrics. Both of the artists delivered extremely well. I saw your forum about for a hook, and a third verse. After you get the hook from the person I can possibly deliver you a third verse. Just let me know if that's alright with you. Check out some of my tracks on here to see where I'm at.

    - Billion

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    Thanks for the nice words, listened to a couple of your tracks and think you could fit on there for sure. Yea someone is just starting to work on a hook so I will repost it afterwards or just send it to you.

  4. SonnyChapelle
    SonnyChapelle on Mon 3rd Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    Hey man im feeling this, those lyrics are real.
    i wish i could sing or rap but just because for the inspiration i got from it i uploaded something real quick: https://soundcloud.com/sonnychapelle/i-dont-test

    Your vocal and studio qualities are way better and you are probably looking for a rapper. In any case, you can message me about the soundcloud upload and what not, i'l remove it it if you want or change the name.

    Overall good production , also the 2nd voice sounds good dont type that out unless you need to.

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    Hey thanks for trying it out, I don't think it fit very well with the overall feel of the track though. You don't have to worry about taking it down if you like it :D Again thanks for giving it a shot, noone else has done a damn thing lol.

  5. onlyhits
    onlyhits on Mon 3rd Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    This is golden man! Lyrics are tight, flow is on point, and beat is perfect. Can't wait for a great hook and third verse!

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    Thanks so much man, I really liked the beat as well.

  6. acesmith
    acesmith on Mon 3rd Oct 2016 - 4 years ago

    You should probably also put the lyrics to your second verse in the Song Lyrics tab.

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    It's actually a different person on the 2nd but I may type them out

  7. KirbyMenlo
    KirbyMenlo on Thu 29th Sep 2016 - 4 years ago

    digging it bro

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    Thanks!

  8. acesmith
    acesmith on Wed 28th Sep 2016 - 4 years ago

    These lyrics are dope man

    SJW
    Reply by SJW

    Thank you, appreciate it!

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I said I don't have much, just a box of scars, a couple of thoughts and a faulty heart
A trouble with loss and I fall to hard but you can come if you want and we can call it ours
I want to run through the fog and count the stars, live with the trees and drown the dark
Swim with the breeze till I've found my start and I'm in disbelief of the natural art
Im just Drumming along with the songs in my head
Humming along with the wrong and the dead
Mumbling thoughts that forgot to be said
With a rumbling gut thats got to be fed
All in my head I'm living all in my head Im comfortable here built walls and a bed
A closet and shed filled with faults and regret that I open up when I've got to reflect
Yeah I've got to reflect, press pause and reset, let flaws get ahead then it's off with the head
Dropped in this coffin and tossed to the rest Im the cause and effect yeah it's caustic at best
Im honest...what does honesty get in a world that we'd kill for a quality check
It's a whirlwind of guilt where I've lost my respect
for a world that I built but forgot where it went...

 


 

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