Sleep Walking Produced By Mproblmz - SpiritualFoenix

10th Sep 2016 03:22 - 10 years ago
Description : The music was produced by Mproblmz

The opening poem was taken from Darkness by Lord Byron

The poem after the hook is called Real Dreams by Zoey from www . inspirational-poems. net in the dreams tab.

This song is about me living with bipolar 1 and living in a waking dream.

I plan to record a better version but I did this as a rough cut. Any help in mastering my vocals or polishing them would be helpful because that is not my strong suit.

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give SpiritualFoenix some feedback.

zipbass
zipbass 30th Oct 2021 18:10 - 4 years ago
Same as sunnydas said about effect for the voice.
I like the instrument in background used nice sound.
I like the voice/rap too, cool rythmic.
I can remix your voice, send me a wetransfer link =) (free of course and you keep the files and rights)
StrikingDaggers
StrikingDaggers 30th Oct 2021 16:38 - 4 years ago
Dope track SpiritualFoenix! The beat is laid back and the flows are sick. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
sunnydas01
sunnydas01 7th Dec 2018 03:48 - 7 years ago
put a compressor or limiter on the vocals, Eq out anything under 150 Hz and boost the higher frequencies a bit more for clarity. great track bro
theHumps
theHumps 5th Dec 2018 19:57 - 7 years ago
Totally dig the music! Totally dig the lyrics! Well put together, chilled vibe, despite being a rough cut.

Wayne
Tripcore
Tripcore 5th Dec 2018 04:41 - 7 years ago
Nice track, I like it. Definitely worth mastering
SouljahSlim3000
SouljahSlim3000 4th Dec 2018 18:18 - 7 years ago
Deep lyrics.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 17th Sep 2016 11:51 - 10 years ago
Wow, this is some cool, smooth hip hop.

The right panned vocal is strange choice but it gives things a different character. I'd definitely centre it but maybe just leave it as it is.

I like the very first organ notes and then the 0:11 hummed vocal. Maybe violin mixed in too there?

Then classic hip hop beats and this is all very atmospheric. Good, poetic vocal.

0:46 sort of harp I recognise from somewhere else. Where does it come from?

1:09 very cool violin, I think. Lovely tone.

This would be fine as an instrumental.

2:25 why does the vocal get louder at this point?

Anyway, great stuff. Except I hate the alarm clock at the end - just because I hate that sound! But I understand why it's there...
SpiritualFoenix
SpiritualFoenix replied 18th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the compliment man. I agree the pan is skewed. It was an error in recording but I put it up to show a friend and have been to busy to rework it. The vocals are recorded poorly and I have no experience in mastering tracks which would explain the change in volume. I am working on getting around people with more experience. I have to many other hobbies to focus on learning how to master tracks at this time. Thanks for the constructive criticism family, best of luck in all you endeavors.
swindla007
swindla007 17th Sep 2016 04:04 - 10 years ago
This track is dope, your vocals are smooth, beats are good...good job man.
Keep it up.
Dj Swindla
SpiritualFoenix
SpiritualFoenix replied 18th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that.
mprabuzz
mprabuzz 10th Sep 2016 18:22 - 10 years ago
i'll mastering your track, just sent me the file
sorry my bad english
SpiritualFoenix
SpiritualFoenix replied 10th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks man I will re-record and then send them over.
onlyhits
onlyhits 10th Sep 2016 18:19 - 10 years ago
This is really great. Lyrics are pretty dope! I would not pan the vocal so much to the left though.
SpiritualFoenix
SpiritualFoenix replied 10th Sep 2016 - 10 years ago
Good ear. It was mainly just a really rough cut that I accidently recorded improperly but I wanted to let someone hear it.
mprabuzz
mprabuzz 10th Sep 2016 17:58 - 10 years ago
fokin awesome !!!

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