Tags : | Hip Hop | 3.39 MB | Featured

Description : The music was produced by Mproblmz

The opening poem was taken from Darkness by Lord Byron

The poem after the hook is called Real Dreams by Zoey from www . inspirational-poems. net in the dreams tab.

This song is about me living with bipolar 1 and living in a waking dream.

I plan to record a better version but I did this as a rough cut. Any help in mastering my vocals or polishing them would be helpful because that is not my strong suit.

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  1. sunnydas01
    sunnydas01 on Fri 7th Dec 2018 - 1 year ago

    put a compressor or limiter on the vocals, Eq out anything under 150 Hz and boost the higher frequencies a bit more for clarity. great track bro

  2. theHumps
    theHumps on Wed 5th Dec 2018 - 1 year ago

    Totally dig the music! Totally dig the lyrics! Well put together, chilled vibe, despite being a rough cut.

    Wayne

  3. Tripcore
    Tripcore on Wed 5th Dec 2018 - 1 year ago

    Nice track, I like it. Definitely worth mastering

  4. SouljahSlim3000
    SouljahSlim3000 on Tue 4th Dec 2018 - 1 year ago

    Deep lyrics.

  5. Balance21
    Balance21 on Wed 5th Oct 2016 - 3 years ago

    you got me hooked man am gonna check out your other tracks, the lyrics are deep and penetrates the soul man.i hope you can fix the audio,stay blessed.

    VerbatimOak222
    Reply by VerbatimOak222

    Thanks man, I'm glad it makes sense to someone else. I re-recorded a new version It is up on my soundcloud. Search for Spiritual Phoenix, it is blue phoenix as a logo. I already followed you.

  6. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Sat 17th Sep 2016 - 3 years ago

    Wow, this is some cool, smooth hip hop.

    The right panned vocal is strange choice but it gives things a different character. I'd definitely centre it but maybe just leave it as it is.

    I like the very first organ notes and then the 0:11 hummed vocal. Maybe violin mixed in too there?

    Then classic hip hop beats and this is all very atmospheric. Good, poetic vocal.

    0:46 sort of harp I recognise from somewhere else. Where does it come from?

    1:09 very cool violin, I think. Lovely tone.

    This would be fine as an instrumental.

    2:25 why does the vocal get louder at this point?

    Anyway, great stuff. Except I hate the alarm clock at the end - just because I hate that sound! But I understand why it's there...

    VerbatimOak222
    Reply by VerbatimOak222

    Thanks for the compliment man. I agree the pan is skewed. It was an error in recording but I put it up to show a friend and have been to busy to rework it. The vocals are recorded poorly and I have no experience in mastering tracks which would explain the change in volume. I am working on getting around people with more experience. I have to many other hobbies to focus on learning how to master tracks at this time. Thanks for the constructive criticism family, best of luck in all you endeavors.

  7. swindla007
    swindla007 on Sat 17th Sep 2016 - 3 years ago

    This track is dope, your vocals are smooth, beats are good...good job man.
    Keep it up.
    Dj Swindla

    VerbatimOak222
    Reply by VerbatimOak222

    Thanks I appreciate that.

  8. mprabuzz
    mprabuzz on Sat 10th Sep 2016 - 3 years ago

    i'll mastering your track, just sent me the file
    sorry my bad english

    VerbatimOak222
    Reply by VerbatimOak222

    Thanks man I will re-record and then send them over.

  9. onlyhits
    onlyhits on Sat 10th Sep 2016 - 3 years ago

    This is really great. Lyrics are pretty dope! I would not pan the vocal so much to the left though.

    VerbatimOak222
    Reply by VerbatimOak222

    Good ear. It was mainly just a really rough cut that I accidently recorded improperly but I wanted to let someone hear it.

  10. mprabuzz
    mprabuzz on Sat 10th Sep 2016 - 3 years ago

    fokin awesome !!!

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