Escape - Instrumental - Wordybum

3rd Jul 2016 23:05 - 10 years ago
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Description : something new i'm working on. its been a while since i have built something from the ground up, and i'm a bit of a novice, so any feedback would be more than welcome.

No vocals...yet.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

Mashita
Mashita 6th Jul 2016 12:26 - 10 years ago
Great track
though if it were me, I'd pump up those hi hats to take up some space in the high end
wordybum
wordybum replied 12th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
thanks so much for the listen. after listening to all of your feedback and listening to the song again a few times, i am going to work on some hats this weekend and possibly track some vocals.

Bless.
BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive 4th Jul 2016 00:54 - 10 years ago
This Track Is Fairly Good Right Now, But Here's My Take. Even Though It's Short Maybe Add Some Transitions Between Verse, Hook, Chorus You Know. To Fill It Up Add Some Bass To It. I Might Also Add Some Strings((Chords Or A Melody)). Then Some Hi Hats Might Help Add More To The Rap Feel You're Approaching. Nevertheless This Will Be A Great Production With A Little More Work. Also, If You Wouldn't Checking Out My Track & Providing Some Feedback I'd Appreciate That. One Love

- Billion
wordybum
wordybum replied 4th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
thanks for the listen and the feedback. i really appreciate it. i am going to add some transitions between verse and chorus by building off of the existing bass lines & drums, but i want to keep it as minimal as possible as far as 'body' is concerned. i was thinking of going with some strings to beef it up in certain spots, but i felt it would take away from the vision, and the vision was to add a pulsing soundtrack to what will absolutely be a verbal onslaught. i am going to play with some hat sounds and see if i can find anything that will fit with the whole vibe of the track.

and i am definitely going to check out some of your work. Bless.
orelqr
orelqr 4th Jul 2016 00:16 - 10 years ago
nice liked the feeling it gives :)
sounds like a track u put in some scary game xD
wordybum
wordybum replied 4th Jul 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks, Brother. as soon as the finished product is up and running i will message you for a listen.

cheers.

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