Toys - Future Bass - Yoboya

That pretty good

Welldone!

its lit fam

It's Great

awesome

very nice !!

Nice trackk!!!

Nice Mate!

Nice track..... !!!!!!!!!

Awesome track, with nice vibes. You had a very gradual buildup for the drop, which is really uncommon, but uncommon is alright. I love your use of synths and leads, and it all comes together for a true Future Bass track. I see where you have "Collab Request" visible, and I would love to help in anyway with the track, or do a new project with you.

~GO

Great track! Nice selection of sounds. I really loved the chill vibe you had in the beginning and then the lead that faded in around :25 was very nice.

I think your structure needs some work. One example: Your drop length is 32 bars. Instead of bringing that cool synth at 1:04 at the 8th bar, bring it in at the 16th bar so it doesn’t feel as repetitive as it continues and the same thing is happening in the song.

Please note that it’s fine to experiment and ignore these because there really aren’t any rules when it comes to music. The only rule is that it anything goes only as long as it sounds good. In this case it negatively impacted the song by making the drop feel too repetitive, so I suggest changing things up.

There are some really cool elements in your song (like at 2:20) and the opening square synth, but it eventually feels repetitive and tiresome.
Overall it was a very good try at future bass, and I hope you keep working to improve. This is significantly better than the first song you uploaded. So keep working.

-Sheen

very good job

good job