Cookies For Dinner - SeriouslyJoking

Regreetings.

"I feel like I won something"

You did but it's only the very small and unspectacular prize of a few lines of thoughts from me*. However, you are free to keep that prize and cherish it forever. Perhaps have it printed out, framed and hung on the wall.

Anyway, thanks for letting me know about that cool guitar loop. I should have guessed it was guitar though it does also have an unusual sound, which is probably the sidechaining effect. You've used it very well.

1:07 vocal rise is very cool. Such a pure and beautiful note.

1:24-1:30 some audio pop problems as you cut the samples off. You can make a more professional job of this by smoothing out those slightly awkward and untidy edits.

1:38 nice change again. Good move to the ride cymbal.

2:05 I don't think you should go back to that section as you've done as it's pretty much exactly the same thing as before at 0:47. Still good but I'd like to either not have it there at all or have it there but with more variation eg another part added on top.

Actually, that's my only real criticism of the track - that there's a bit too much repetition of the same parts in the same way as heard earlier. They're all good parts/sections but that's just my particular "hard to please" criticism. Hey, there's always room for improvement, even when you come up with a fine creation such as this.

Is the piano the one thing you're playing on here?

Congrats again.

Greetings
thats a cool music specially that vocal line
and that rhythm change in 0:46, was cool
and in 1:22 you got a cool debut for the drums
Kind regards
J_*

Wow, hearing some of my stuff back is nice but this is just sick! The riff is made with an electric gitar sample. Funny thing is that the dog on my avatar is the one who made it as it is by jumping on my stuff like a monkey. Many thanks for sharing this!

This is seriously nice. Easy to get lost into listening too. It's eclectic and changing. Love that you chose silence at 1:23. Percussion syncopation is nice at the end as well. well done song and good interpretation of the diverse loops.
Steve. (And I see you snuck in your piano style at the end as well)..

Hello.

This is a rather cool piece of music, with some obviously skilful arranging of these various loops.

Up to 0:47 is kind of like its own track and then there's a weird, glitchy bass section and then 0:57 that is one killer riff! Which instrument is that? So damn funky, and with some real menace.

1:16 drum fills are great and make me think of 80s hip hop.

Damn, this is so enjoyable! I'm a little busy now so will return later to describe in more detail this loop masterpiece.

A definite favourite for me.

Hi SJ!

Brilliant work...special tasted chill out with lots of connected elements...how you put together those cool loops is incredible...great job on this...

Greetings, Danke

Its crazy how you create a song like this ,i enjoyed this really. You have good ears.
Wonderful

Enjoyed this piece a lot. You have a great sense of structure, and how to vary the music to hold the ear, and where to work the breaks. Dug it.

Well S.J....you did a seriously good job of pulling this all together...like the first half best I think...has a bit of R&B flavour but I`m really impressed with how you brought so many elements into the kix and still made them all not only very coherent in it but also how they sit so clearly in quite a big mix...this is very cool...enjoyed it....well done...Ed