Sailor - Oliverzookamoo

I like this one...truly nicely produced !:)

Compliments______Orlando

Interesting approach under ambient...it could be but not on the usual way...vocs are very 'chartish' and the drums are on the hip hop line...those are great and the structure of the song too..bit overgained yes...

Overall, it's a fine production, handshake, Danke

That vocal is insanely good. I'm gonna have to agree with Skwish Fish about maybe adding a little melody with the keys in the 2nd verse just to keep things interesting. Also, if you're gonna have the drums then I think you should commit to them. They sound like an after-thought as is. Like you weren't sure if you wanted to add them or not.
Otherwise I really like your song. Could definitely hear that on the radio.
Zee

I don't want to come across as negative as my musical tastes are a little removed from this material, I think your voice by today's standards is very good, in fact it sounds exactly like most of the commercial material being produced today, now that is in fact a compliment and answers your forum question..I think if anything the dynamics of the track are a little one dimensional in that there's an immediate plateauing of emotion, no ebbing no flowing, maybe it's the autotune...unfortunately my preconceptions are getting the better of me and I'm sounding out of touch with today's vocal style, in all seriousness you've got a good to excellent voice and I can't see why you couldn't with the right production company get some commercial air play....all the best cheers PJB

This is a very nice track. All the components that exist within it work together in perfect harmony.

I do have to say though, it seems like it's missing a lot. It relies heavily on the repeating piano riff and the acapella to drive it along. The drums are hardly noticeable and seem very distant when they are. Also, the vocals at the very end do not seem to be in the same key.

In order to become ready to be released as a single, this track needs to be touched up on. Add a few more varying piano parts in there and maybe even a little melody to help drive it along.

I hope I haven't been too harsh. This track is absolutely wonderful otherwise!! :)

Keep on making music! Hope to hear from you soon!

Best,
Skwish Fish