The Game Crazy - Ernestking78

11th Nov 2015 22:15 - 10 years ago
Description : Revolutionary type rap with lyrics,can I get some feedback I appreciate it

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give Ernestking78 some feedback.

Dennel
Dennel 7th Sep 2016 21:46 - 10 years ago
Hey EK, instant fav this is what I'm talkin' 'bout! I luv tracks like this that turn the focus on the real subject matter and ain't afraid to say it like it is! I have an unfinished track based on the continuous and daily assassinations of our young brothers, sisters and babies "entitled Hands Up Don't Shoot!", if I can somehow get the track finished up we may have to do a colab. Great job on this I am impressed.

Peace

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apuigr
apuigr 12th Dec 2015 20:21 - 10 years ago
Very Nice.
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey 14th Nov 2015 04:06 - 10 years ago
nICE CONCEPT LOVED IT MAN
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 14th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks
mystlife
mystlife 14th Nov 2015 03:29 - 10 years ago
however it was a great song ( honestly )
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 14th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks
highdhausen
highdhausen 13th Nov 2015 18:44 - 10 years ago
nice work man thanks
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
You welcome thank you I'm glad you like it
BCVProductions
BCVProductions 13th Nov 2015 14:28 - 10 years ago
Yeah, I like these lyrics a lot. I would like to hear a vocal backing track on the hook to brace it a little. A slightly less hot sound on the main vocals too bc it distorts in some places.
This is a really good song and a tight rap.
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks what's a vocal backing track? A dub? I THINK I KNOW what you talking about with the distortion I peeped that 2 so I'm a watch out for that in doing my next song
farzy
farzy 13th Nov 2015 09:11 - 10 years ago
this is perfect
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that,it feel good when you make music for yourself and the world,for others to like it besides yourself as well
larrybarrow31
larrybarrow31 13th Nov 2015 09:00 - 10 years ago
Tha track is dope fam, really saying something for the world to hear, i love music wit a meassage and you nailed it my friend, the beat is tight and the vocals on point. keep'em coming my friend
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that,your comment inspire me even more to keep going and put the best I can out
HunterFoxzAC
HunterFoxzAC 13th Nov 2015 02:12 - 10 years ago
Really nice...Don't listen to Rap all the time..I really like what you did with this Track....
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that
pseudonym43
pseudonym43 13th Nov 2015 01:17 - 10 years ago
shid iz hard homie keep it up G~!
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 13th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that,I'm writing now I wanna raise the bar so we can get good music from more artists again
SecretSam123
SecretSam123 12th Nov 2015 18:49 - 10 years ago
i like it bro. you got good vibes, sticking in with the rhythm of the beat. it sounds simple but so many people struggle to do it haha!
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 12th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I appreciate that!!!
JasonCroft
JasonCroft 12th Nov 2015 13:50 - 10 years ago
nice job
im not suppose to fuss tracks
but i just tell my opinion:

1.i think it would be better if you add some effects like chorus or vocodex to your chorus parts

2.your vocal line is so wide i think it would be better if you turn down the volume a bit and turn down the widing effect's (every plugin you use) volume a bit

3.i just heard a noise like (Wiss Wiss) when you're rapping so it can be better if you use a compressor for killing some additional freqs or you can soundgoodize your vocal

however it was a great song ( honestly )
and i just told my opinion
hats off...
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 12th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks it ain't nothing like some feedback so you can get a sense of how other people hear it
Olhm
Olhm 12th Nov 2015 07:36 - 10 years ago
It's a track & all that, but it can use a little more personality. Like if somebody says something about eating popcorn, toss a sample of some kernels popping in the background, &/or toss a chorus effect on certain vocals to give to lyrics more pop/variation/ definition. Only other thing I can think of is maybe back off the main compression a bit so the kick & snare don't get washed out in the mix. Your track sounds good dude
Ernestking78
Ernestking78 replied 12th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks I never even asked the man at the studio can he put sound effects behind certain words but I do think it's a nice idea,like if you say bee you hear a buzz in the background yeah I'm a try implementing that

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