SJW Colab Ruffkins - Wordybum

Thanks for all the feedback, and the producer of the beat is still newer and learning but has been getting better and better and I just like something about his sounds, they seem to click with me. Hopefully we can figure something out to make this a full, complete track ! :)

The raps, flows and lyrics are top notch!!! Fire!!! but the voice on the second verse could go harder. The mix in general needs a lot of work. The backing track is also very weak ( in my opinion) Such good rap skills deserve better beats, thats all there is to that. If you want to keep the dreamy feel to the track, keep the piano and synthy sounds, but rework that beat. Theres a hazy sound on the rhythm in the first part of the track, thats super annoying. Listening to it a second time, I realize that the last part of the song is where you should be heading. Just look at how the waveform expands. All of this is just an opinion, so please dont take it too personally. Listening to this a 3rd time, makes me think a chorus/hook could work really well too....
ok.. thats my 2 cents