Listen To More Than A Day Full Version Pop Song By Oliverzookamoo At Looperman.com

Lovely voice.
Melodies.
Backing vocals.
Lyrics.
Playing.
Guitar and I have a "thing",
so I love that. haha
Fancy a duet?

You have a great knack for song writing andI really enjoy your vocal work man. Killing it.

my panties just dropped and I'm a dude! some drums would make this complete, could I try to put some drums to it?

Well, you certainly did take that snippet to the next level. I really like the unplugged nature of this. You have some nice harmony vocals in this as well. I liked the way that you used tempo and silence (a powerful tool in a song) to set up your chorus lines and separate the verses all while using the same guitar riff (not an easy thing to do).

So now that you have a good idea of what you want this one to sound like, a little bit of advice. You just need to keep practicing your craft. This is excellent work, and you have a huge upside, you simply need to keep working like you are. Keep thinking about what makes a hit record for guys like Ed Sheeran or Sam Smith. What are they doing that makes songs that they have, that are similar to this one, stand above the others. Maybe think about having a version of this song with added instrumentation....add some drums, and a nice bass line (something like an upright bass would really work well on this). Maybe add some strings in spots, give it a completely different feel. That way you have two versions of a great song. Don't be afraid to experiment and spread your wings a bit. Like I said, you have really good chops, especially for a guy who is only 14. You keep this up and the sky is literally the limit for you.

I enjoyed this one immensely. Keep at this. Study the guys who are successful. Find your lane, and then put the pedal to the metal and don't look back. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear