Description : Hey guys, so I finally finished the chill out track I posted a couple days ago. EpicRecord is actually going to be providing some vocals on top of this, so I'm really excited for that! I don't know what genre to call this really because it has some elements of chill out and chill step, so I'm not really sure.
I cleaned up the mix a bit(hopefully i didn't take away from any of the atmosphere, and was able to actually master this one, so yay for a track not being raw! I hope you enjoy "Breathe" in its entirety and it tells a story of its own, like intended!
Thanks for all the support guys!
Rico L.
Hi mate, beautiful track here, I would agree with some of the earlier comments though about the Dubstep beat. If you could change the snare to a rim shot or a less aggressive compressed snare then I think it would sound better, personally speaking of course, other than that its a fantastic track!!
"I want to thank you for all of the honest and helpful critique"
Hey, no problem. I try to help in any small way I can. Hard to know how any feedback will be received and sometimes people may already be aware of errors/failings. Perhaps sometimes pointing them out can serve as encouragement to go fix them ("Yes, we did notice that dodgy bit").
Anyway: I don't see a lot/anything wrong here and I knew you'd keep the dubstep loop so congrats on the other changes.
I'm currently finishing updating a dual female vocal track from four years ago. It's ridiculous how many awkward audio pop edits there were in the previous version. I can't understand how I could have missed them. However, I wouldn't be surprised if no one pointed them out if I had uploaded it to Looperman. Instead, you'll soon be getting the much improved, mostly smoothly transitioned version. It's a jazz track called The Second Law Of Self Love.
Hi. I commented on the earlier version of this, with some ideas, but no reply so far. Oh well.
Anyway: this sounds great - really uplifting and melodic. I'd still rather not have that dubstep beat but I guess it's OK. Everything sits very tightly together and this is really classily made and mixed stuff.
Happy, blissful music that is very pleasant to listen to.
Just for a change, I won't bother with any specific details. I think I may have already done that in my earlier review.
Hey static,
Sorry man I've been so busy lately I never got a chance to respond! I took a lot of your advice (except for the dub step drum change) and it made the track a lot better. I want to thank you for all of the honest and helpful critique! I look forward to listening to all of your new tracks!
Wow, this sounds beautiful.. very relaxing, I love music like this and I love this track. :)
I wonder how it will sound with vocals. Anyway, keep it up!
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Yes man ... very good ...
Thomas Flek
(here's one of their albums)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I272bQdrTuA
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Hey, no problem. I try to help in any small way I can. Hard to know how any feedback will be received and sometimes people may already be aware of errors/failings. Perhaps sometimes pointing them out can serve as encouragement to go fix them ("Yes, we did notice that dodgy bit").
Anyway: I don't see a lot/anything wrong here and I knew you'd keep the dubstep loop so congrats on the other changes.
I'm currently finishing updating a dual female vocal track from four years ago. It's ridiculous how many awkward audio pop edits there were in the previous version. I can't understand how I could have missed them. However, I wouldn't be surprised if no one pointed them out if I had uploaded it to Looperman. Instead, you'll soon be getting the much improved, mostly smoothly transitioned version. It's a jazz track called The Second Law Of Self Love.
Well done again with your chillstep track.
simply keep them coming,
lol
Alex
Anyway: this sounds great - really uplifting and melodic. I'd still rather not have that dubstep beat but I guess it's OK. Everything sits very tightly together and this is really classily made and mixed stuff.
Happy, blissful music that is very pleasant to listen to.
Just for a change, I won't bother with any specific details. I think I may have already done that in my earlier review.
Big congrats!
Sorry man I've been so busy lately I never got a chance to respond! I took a lot of your advice (except for the dub step drum change) and it made the track a lot better. I want to thank you for all of the honest and helpful critique! I look forward to listening to all of your new tracks!
Thanks so much again!
Rico L.
I wonder how it will sound with vocals. Anyway, keep it up!