Description : a mustard kind of track with an old school beat and some other sounds that i thought went good together. has a little chorus just a few vocal samples i found and put together. comments welcomed let me know what u think or how i could improve this track. thanks for the listen

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  1. JayWill
    JayWill on Sun 12th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    This is dope. I have to try killing it. Dope vibe it brings bro

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks jay will hit me up when and if u do something cant wait

  2. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Sun 12th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    Hi. This is pretty cool.

    A very 80s hip hop sound with the 808 stuff going on.

    I like your moody, suspenseful intro. And then there's good space in the track around the groove. And a good main bassline. Effected vocal is pretty cool.

    Maybe it's a bit too sparse 1:42-1:45. Should add some new elements there as we've already here the previous ones many times. That breakdown needs more in it.
    2:33 also a bit too much space. Needs a bassline rather than just that long, low hip hop bass drum.

    All the same, good work.

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks for the input appreciate it ill work on some changes

  3. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Sat 11th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    you should cut some of the intro.

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks man maybe i should trim it a little thanks for the input

  4. silverman
    silverman on Wed 8th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    It's crying out for some home made lyrics.
    Even maybe a nursery rhyme or words rapped from a pop song not a rap song .... rap the pop .... get what I mean?

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks for the listen would love to hear some vocals on top of that

  5. centralsdev
    centralsdev on Wed 8th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    i like the first of it really much. is all from looperman or do you creat your own? for improvement you should keep making beat. you allread got some good skills.

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks for the listen appreciate the comments. just some stuff that i found here and there and put them together

  6. DozyMan
    DozyMan on Wed 8th Apr 2015 - 4 years ago

    Nice old school 808 style :) Nice stuff Ruff.

    Reply by DawqShots

    thanks man appreciate the comments

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