Tearing MySelf - Samern

24th Nov 2014 10:39 - 11 years ago
Description : Full Song written By Sara n (Also the Vocal)
And The Music By Me
Edited on FL Studio 10.
Waiting for your opinions

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give samern some feedback.

promenade2239
promenade2239 1st Dec 2014 23:44 - 11 years ago
hi,
this is really good music. my only sugesstion would be why do not find the proper balance between the arrangement and the vocal part? Some 'harmonic consonance' and 'proper chords' so to speak. I hope it makes sense. I mean there's really excellent vocals in here but all the rest seems to stand out or just maybe there's too much elements in here, I do not know. Myself I will put the main focus on vocals and the overall message instead developing the other elements. Let us say a very 'minimal' approach - but it is still only my personal preference.
I enjoyed your track, Alex
samern
samern replied 3rd Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Alex

you will not believe how i record the vocal :D
my cousin Sara (The Vocal) in a different town now so i sent the music and she recorded her Vocal by mobile phone and whatsapp it so i had to lower the vocal volume to hide many mistakes
i needed to have the vocal just as a rehearsal how it will be. so next month i'm going to re record the vocal (not by mobile phone) :D

i appreciate your words about the song

Samer
Evisma
Evisma 1st Dec 2014 19:07 - 11 years ago
Everyone has said it already. This is an awesome track.

All I would like to add is the kick-drum seems a bit fake and out of place in the track. I like how strong it is, it just sounds too muffled. I truly dig all the rest!
samern
samern replied 3rd Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks a lot for the comment
this track was my first project on FL studio 10 so i was less knowledge about its abilities
by time i become better (i hope)
Glad to hear notices about my work it support me to improve it

with appreciation

Samer
RichieWinn
RichieWinn 1st Dec 2014 08:41 - 11 years ago
Hi Samer

Firstly thanks again for posting on my recent track "Stay".

I like this very much. It's so good to hear what i call "proper songs" with verses, choruses and middle sections. Nice vocals too. Not sure about the string section running all the way and maybe you might consider pacing it a bit and adding instruments as the song progresses. However, welcome to the Loop and best regards from Chester, UK.

Richie
samern
samern replied 3rd Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Richie
Glad That you like the track and surely I'll consider your notices about it

with appreciation

Samer
SIXTY6
SIXTY6 30th Nov 2014 11:21 - 11 years ago
This is just great, I can not wait to hear more of your work.
samern
samern replied 30th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Your words are the great dear
Glad that you like it and i hope that soon can bring my new project here

With appreciation

Samer
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 27th Nov 2014 20:09 - 11 years ago
Yeah man! Nice rock track. Loads of different sounds going on and nice vocal. The mix quality is all on point and the arrangement is good as well. What a great way to introduce yourself.
FR
samern
samern replied 30th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks FR
i appreciate your words about the track
It's my first full project and i hope to improve my music more and more

Thanks again

Samer
D3RELICT
D3RELICT 26th Nov 2014 20:56 - 11 years ago
I really like the strings in the background. Gives it kind of a cinematic vibe.
samern
samern replied 30th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks..
i think that the strings is the base for most music and sure not all
but i like mixing Guitars Power this something more soft
i feel it give nice music
you know sure i have some mistakes but i wish i could correct and improve my work

With appreciation

Samer
ScottB55
ScottB55 25th Nov 2014 16:40 - 11 years ago
Great track, Samern. Not usually my preferred taste, but when the musicianship is there, which it is here, I can certainly appreciate it.

I look forward to hearing more of your work.

Cheers,
Scott
samern
samern replied 26th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Scott
your words mean much for me
hope i can come with a new and better music

Samer
soundhound
soundhound 25th Nov 2014 13:04 - 11 years ago
Very cool track ...My Man
Really like how you put this together, off the top I felt her voice was a little
low in the mix, but as she gets going it does increase in level...
For me I like to give the vocal control of the front line, it's about the lyric
in a singing song, the Music is just along for the ride
" The Car she sits in " if you understand my point...
Your Music bed track Man, is very good tight and feels real good...I LIKE IT...
Keep up the good work...

Peace...TG.
samern
samern replied 26th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
TG my bro
thanks a lot
i got you idea about the vocal and surly i'll consider
and let the driver drive soooo crazy :D

with appreciation

Samer
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE 25th Nov 2014 06:20 - 11 years ago
Definetly sounds like something id have on my player. Great work all around
-EYEDYE
samern
samern replied 25th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Bro
Your words mean a lot for me
i wish i get better and better
and sure it will be amazing to have my songs on others player :D

with appreciation

Samer
Orlando51
Orlando51 25th Nov 2014 05:12 - 11 years ago
Welcome to Looperman family Samern...you shared very good rock number for a start! Keep up good work!:)

Compliments____Orlando
samern
samern replied 25th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Orlando
I hope i continue improving my music foreword
and one thing for sure is i will always need your notices and opinions
with appreciation

Samer
Danke
Danke 24th Nov 2014 20:34 - 11 years ago
Hello Samern!!!

Warm welcome right here...good place...:-)

I didn't know that rock/metal is a fav style right there in Syria...good news...and if I listen to your track, I can hear lots of melodies and an awesome female voice...the instrumentation is stunning too, bass is wow as 18 signed it...bravo, bravo...was that live played?
1 side note (if I can): guitars are a bit sterilized in tone...there are lots of amp collections on the net, for example Amplitube, gave you nearly live feeling...
But that's only my visions...:-)

Much respect and have a nice time here...

Greet you, Danke
samern
samern replied 24th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks bro
You gavdon't answern amazing words
- yes in Syria rock and metal is a fav. Unfortunately we don't have good metal band localy but I wish some day we will.
- all music in the track edited on fl studio by keyboard but I tried to give each instrument the soul of a real one
- unfortunately i don't have a good electric guitar vst
I just used Slayer vst. And it didn't make realastic guitar
but I will try to re edit again with less amps

finally ofcourse you can give any notes any time
it help me to improve my music

thanks again bro with appreciation

Samer..
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 24th Nov 2014 19:33 - 11 years ago
Welcome to The Loop samern...I am sure you will find good musical friends here....I am always interested in hearing the compositional thinking, arrangements and special elements that musicians from different parts of our world bring with them...you do it well...I do not listen to a lot of metal rock but I do really like groups like Nightwish (Norway) that bring the melodic approach to it...Goth rock...I enjoyed this one...you have obviously put a lot of thought into making it not just metal...but melodic metal..good job....Ed
samern
samern replied 24th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks friend. Your words mean too much for me
I hope to have your notices always..
with appreciation
Samer N
Eighteen
Eighteen 24th Nov 2014 16:11 - 11 years ago
Wow kick-ass bass :D nice I like
the song is awesome
samern
samern replied 24th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks bro, i appreciate this :D

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