Listen To Acropraxis Electronic Song By Brecken At Looperman.com

hi

first of all, i think the tune is great!
although i do agree with Alividlife, once the mastering is done, it will be a masterpiece :)

as Alividlife says droping the Db will help loads, also i believe you should learn to equalize the frequencies, this will further counter the clipping and/or overlapping.

personally i find it easiest to solo your melodies and use a frequency analyzer plugin, to get a clearer view of what frequency range each part of your tune is running at. and based on that you can figure out where parts a conflicting, and if they are conflicting you then adjust the certain part using an EQ plugin.

having said this, it is important that you do the research, because there is always more to learn :)

hope that helps!

anyways, good luck, and... yep im also a fan :) very chilled sounds and catchy melodies here, can't wait to here the collab!!!

well you just drop the main mixer DB by a decibel point...
like one or something...

most music is inbetween -6db's and -3dbs...
(Really well polished music sounds like it is -1 db)

Decibel points.....
(Taken DIRECTLY from)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Decibel
Acoustics

Main article: Sound pressure

The decibel is commonly used in acoustics to quantify sound levels relative to some 0 dB reference. The reference level is typically set at the threshold of perception of an average human and there are common comparisons used to illustrate different levels of sound pressure.

Ok.... SOOOO!!!!

I know that your reply is, "".... ehhhhhhhh???""

You are clipping in certain freqs... The bass, and the synth.. to my ears...
And, what this article fails to point out, is that when something meets the 0db it fails to register correctly, and becomes......

CLIPPING
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clipping_(audio)

READ THIS AT LEAST!!!! K??

You are peaking at +1 or "something" DB's.
I say "something" because.. there's really no way to tell, it is surpassing what is "audible".... Some stuff can peak and sound great! like some vocals and stuff.. guitars, mainly mid-range.

Basically... when You clip.. you are distorting.. I am a guitarist... (looks at avatar)... soo, just be careful... LISTEN.... ALL A musician has (and I don't give a shit if all you do is loop) is USE YOUR EARS!, and honestly... it is a known statement used between music engineers,
"Mastering your own stuff is like taking your sister to the prom"
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!
Many of us do it here every date... lmao... soo....
It's nice to have someone that has musical taste and listen to your tracks, and tell you what you can do, and can't do///errr!!! SHOULDN'T do. k??

if you have any hopes of going anywhere with music.. You gotta do the research.

You got the ear!!
Just do the research!

Sorry for the long post.
and yes
You are Welcome.

ONLY because I am a fan.

Yah...

Please don't stop doing this style tho!... This is Great!!!

You have a new fan here!

I do think that your levels are just on the verge of being PERFECT! But if you listen very closely to some of the synths and MAYBE your bass drums are clipping..
Just subtle crackles. It's called digital distortion..
I don't know about how much you know about mastering, and I hope I am not offending you, because this sounds great!
Just that you are clipping, just a little bit.

I cannot wait to hear this collab!!!!!

This is FANTASTIC WORK.

Hey, I would love to do vocals to this track instrumental without the other lady vocals. The melody fits me. If you would like to do a collabo please let me know. Otherwise, I love the track. Its very chill and puts you in a cool chillzone.

I love everything you're doing, but i think the pitch on the vocals around 1:20 could be a little lower....i think it's just my taste - regardless it still fits, just seems 'off' i guess...for lack of a better term/phrase. Both of your tracks are awesome. They're entrancing but simple. Keep it up, would love to hear more :3