Listen To Sumassun - WIP Hip Hop Song By RampatheSwift At Looperman.com

10th Sep 2014 04:36 - 11 years ago
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Description : Haven't uploaded anything in a long while. Here's a little cheesy something to pick you up if your feelin down =)

Please comment and criticise on my mix, EQ, FX, song elements, structure, whatever! Tips and trick that have worked for you…… there's always room for improvement and i'm keen to hear your ideas. Thanks for listening.

credit to NenadSimic for the beat:
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/58238

*update* I've re-mixed and rearranged some parts of this song AGAIN and plan to add vocals to it before it's complete.

Comments (24)

If you have time take a listen and give RampatheSwift some feedback.

silverman
silverman 22nd Nov 2014 12:58 - 11 years ago
I feel in no way qualified to critisize anyones stuff but I'm going to.
This is to long.
If this were chopped down into smaller pieces I can hear it at the begining of a comedy sit com or advertising something.
What I'm saying is with a bit of something and I don't know what .... I smell something very very commercial not cheesy.
A sellable product is not to be sniffed at and marked down as cheesy!
jacjames221
jacjames221 26th Oct 2014 11:41 - 11 years ago
jacjames1132@gmail.com

Ill tell you whenever I have something with it ^^
GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 20th Oct 2014 10:36 - 11 years ago
u did a god job on this! really like that sweet melody!
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you. I appreciate your time.
limchoa
limchoa 9th Oct 2014 05:28 - 11 years ago
this is awesome!!loving the beat..
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks limchoa!
pierremachado
pierremachado 6th Oct 2014 10:15 - 11 years ago
Ficou pesada...
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you =]
LargeCock
LargeCock 5th Oct 2014 23:52 - 11 years ago
This is rad:)
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Cheers dude
jacjames221
jacjames221 3rd Oct 2014 14:41 - 11 years ago
Loving this.. really I would die for the audio stems and to remix it
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey man i'd be happy to send the stems to you. Just let me know the best way to send them to you and it's done! I would really like to hear this remixed.
Chawarat
Chawarat 3rd Oct 2014 11:46 - 11 years ago
Very nice I can listen to this all day man.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Haha that means a lot man. Thanks.
promenade2239
promenade2239 3rd Oct 2014 08:43 - 11 years ago
hi again, I like some of the changes you've made here by rearranging the song. Sounds really good like this. The only thing would be that the e piano which I particulary like (the one playing some nice rhythm) seems be a little bit less present here. Synth bass and pad blend-in very nicely in the recording. Im really enjoying this one. NIce work. Congrats, Alex
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 22nd Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks for actively listening Alex! I've made the e-piano a little more present, just for you bud haha, but no i agree it was getting a bit lost in the mix. Vocals yet to be added ft. Larry Barrow. Stay tuned!
surya94
surya94 1st Oct 2014 15:59 - 11 years ago
this is such a cheerful song...
great to listen to when u r with ur mates riding down the country...

Its great
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 1st Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Exactly the type of vibe I was going for =). Cheers.
larrybarrow31
larrybarrow31 23rd Sep 2014 02:18 - 11 years ago
ok, I listen to it again, I gotcha. nice work!!
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 1st Oct 2014 - 11 years ago
Ok man, sorry for the late response. I've just been through exam week at my course so I've been super busy, but now I'm on break so I'm keen to work on our track. If all goes well I'll post some added vocals up within the next few days! Peace.
larrybarrow31
larrybarrow31 14th Sep 2014 17:10 - 11 years ago
super, super nice track, I would love to lay some vocals on this.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Its still a Work-In-Progess (WIP) so it might end up being different later down the line, but I'm happy for you to use this track if you want to. Heard some of your music and i like what i hear. Keen to see what you come up with =)
procenter
procenter 14th Sep 2014 10:28 - 11 years ago
awesome tune dude!
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
cheers!
benjizo
benjizo 13th Sep 2014 18:07 - 11 years ago
Shout out from me.I love it.The overall mix is great.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
appreciate you comments =)
promenade2239
promenade2239 13th Sep 2014 14:05 - 11 years ago
hi RampatheSwift, very nicely done, chill, easy, relaxing vibes. I like how you work with all the samples and elements of the song. Nice e-piano rhythms and motifs that you're playing. This fat synth bass-lead maybe stands out a bit by first listening, but still provides more 'gravity' to the composition... nice glassy pad.
Looking forward to hear the complete song. I thought you might just remove some parts and 'compress' it in 4min. That could be good for finding even some better balance and sound in the final mix.
But you could extend the song as well!
Very creative work - Im enjoying it a lot.
Alex
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you for your comments Alex! Yes i do have problem with having super lengthy songs and i agree it could make for a better arrangement of instrumentation and bigger impact if it were shorter. I did take into account the synth bass being sort of out of place but i will try mix in better. Great that's something to focus on.

I really do appreciate the advice!
Paora
fhimede
fhimede 13th Sep 2014 13:26 - 11 years ago
HAVE GREAT RHYTHM
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
thank you =)
AZZYKO
AZZYKO 12th Sep 2014 15:37 - 11 years ago
Cool vibe here. Sometimes is nice to hear some relaxing hip-hop in bunch of gangsta rap. Really good job done here.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 13th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey thanks man. I just do my own style of music and whatever comes out, comes out. You know? I don't try too hard to stick to any genre. Thanks for listening.
indra001
indra001 12th Sep 2014 07:10 - 11 years ago
hi i like your make itmusic this melody is so good
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 13th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you. It means a lot =)
traz75
traz75 11th Sep 2014 17:02 - 11 years ago
Hello!

Hip-hop is not really my style but this sounds enough nice to me. A bit observation : i feel the drums a little too loud, sometimes suppress some other sounds a bit and for a long track, its not enough various to be a lead channel without the chance of boredom (and there is no need for use it that way, there is nice synths and pianos!). However, its just my opinion as a listener - it might be that sounds better now than with more faint drums.

GJ!

Regards, traz

ps : sorry for my bad english
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 13th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you. Now that you mention it i agree, i think the drums are a little loud and cloud some of the other subtleties. It's more like Hip-Pop than Hip-Hop haha. I will update the track as soon as possible. No need for apologies. I appreciate your comments. - Paora
nfranklin
nfranklin 11th Sep 2014 13:26 - 11 years ago
Smooth track, Love the drums.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 13th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Cheers. There are some pretty sweet loops on here if you look hard enough.
EazyBeatz
EazyBeatz 11th Sep 2014 06:15 - 11 years ago
very fun vibe here. Like a "walk in the park" or something out of a "high school musical" . Still very catchy nice work man. I'm enjoying your style.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 11th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
walk in the park... =) cool.. thanks for listening. appreciate the comments
samuelngumii
samuelngumii 10th Sep 2014 10:46 - 11 years ago
Great Track
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 13th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Cheers.
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 10th Sep 2014 09:29 - 11 years ago
love the chords. upbeat drumming. cheerful. happy music. simple, sweet. nice little touches here and there - like the bits of vocal chorus. do you think there could be more "presence" in the mix? is there a possibility you could "normalize" the track to bring it up? all the best. look forward to hearing more! regards - Dan
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 10th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Dan, by presence do you mean the 1-2kHz frequency range?
Haha yea i did notice that waveform was quite small compared to the other tracks on here so yea i'll normalise as soon as i get a chance. Thanks for the useful advice. Always appreciate that - Paora
LivingInSilence
LivingInSilence 10th Sep 2014 06:30 - 11 years ago
Maybe I have a strange taste in music or something but I didn't find this cheesey at all. It's good, I like it. Those drums are pretty sweet too.
RampatheSwift
RampatheSwift replied 10th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago
Haha cheers. I guess i find the guitar and main melody happy sounding so i say its cheesy in a sense that i can't help but smile/laugh when i hear it. The drums are actually from loop i found on this site!

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