Frogs And Helicopters - Steve010101

Damn, I was listening to the first couple of minutes trying to work out why you thought this track was weird as I found it somewhat beautiful. Then I got my answer around 2:20.

It is weird to only think about frogs and helicopters!

So, first couple of mins have nice pads and an uplifting set of piano chords and other gushing, unfolding pad stuff.

0:30 cello stuff is very warm. My main problem there is that the drums are too dry and everything else has reverb on it so I'd give the drums some reverb. Just a light touch to send them as far out as the drums.

1:13 good dramtic transition as reverse cymbal takes us into another piano-led section.

1:45 string hold and fade is good. And then there's more movement, almost arpeggiation, on a lower string part. Drums are a bit too minimal and simple for me.

Then 2:20 weirdness and then some odd glitching and scratching. Can't say I like it too much but it's definitely weird and trippy. Bit too much of a gimmick for me.

Then we're back to the beautiful stuff, which is what I like about this track but then you go and glitch it up again. How about just making the glitching a lot subtler and less extreme?

4:05 is a good opportunity to do more with the drums but they're the same as at the start. Could really build them to make the track bigger and more powerful. Then vocal sample and scratching is pretty much the same as before.

Overall, a unique track with some bits I really like (but which can be improved) and others I didn't really like (which can also be improved).

Good work.

LOVE IT!!!

The greatest hallucinative but progressive, surrealistic and avantgarde artwork I've ever heard here...

SIMPLY AMAZING!!!

Fav, dl, Hats off

Danke