Silent Spotlight - AviatOfficial

This has the makings of a great track but just over a minute and a half is an intro as far as i'm concerned.
The mix is good and so is the riff but it needs about another five or six minutes earn the title of a track.
Good stuff all the same.
FR

Hi Advait07...I am not a good source of advice on the genre...but I think you are off to a good start and I notice that you have already received some useful comments & suggestions...I am always in agreement with those who suggest variation and structure in compositions as it tends to make the mix more interesting as listening music as well...good for you...keep it going...Ed

Hi,

Good stuff so far, I would like to see drums/kicks come in at around 0.10, the bass is a good touch and you can build on this. Try a bit more variance with the synths, some drops through the harpsichord synth would really make a difference. Look forward to the finished track. Good luck.

Best wishes,

Mark/Larry!

Hi again.

It's a decent basis for a house track even though it doesn't change much. But I guess you'll add that later.

Maybe try quantising your synth parts in different ways. I think they may be a bit straight and on the beat. Maybe try swinging or shuffling them a bit.

The thing that really caught my attention were the little bits of bass that came in towards the end. A bit offbeat and a nice counterpoint to the main synths. It made me think that you could bring in some fat triplet breakbeat drums rather than just the more predictable straight 4/4 house type of beats.

That's what I'd try to do but then I'm more into that than house.

Here's sort of the kind of thing I'm thinking of. Check the main beat of this killer classic track.

The Prodigy - Poison

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QxioaGm2ag

Or, another type of triplet beat I was thinking of can be heard starting at 0:50 here:

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/149028

I know that sort of beat would take it further away from house but it's just my little idea and you could always mix that up with some more predictable house beats.

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