Flaws I See -BabylonInDreams- - NuriB

18th Apr 2014 21:35 - 12 years ago
Description : Thanks to CNRedAgain for being a bomb ass producer. Here's another one to zone to. The hook's a little overused and I might fix it, but I flow nonstop with few errors. Something for the weirdos.

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give NuriB some feedback.

cnredagain
cnredagain 20th Apr 2014 00:15 - 12 years ago
Thank you for Pimpin' this track. Very nice flow,Twista look out!Keep doin' your thang man I hear lots of great potential. I changed my Artist label to Michael Rose Instrumentals and you can find more FREE beats at....

http://www.reverbnation.com/MichaelRoseInstrumentals?profile_view_source=header_icon_nav

Keep up the great craft of HipHop.
SubFreq
SubFreq 19th Apr 2014 00:27 - 12 years ago
Solid bars, really nice track(flow & production). My only recommendation is that when rapping at this pace keep in mind most people don't actively listen to music. Because of this placing emphasis on certain punchlines can be crucial. Other than that this was pretty hardcore man.
NuriB
NuriB replied 19th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you for the listen and the feedback. I'll try to look more at my structuring. I knew some things were funky in it, but didn't take the time to iron it out completely yet. I appreciate the advice.

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