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4th Jan 2014 23:17 - 11 years ago
Description : This is an old collaboration with my mate salook...I put down some track foundations along with the vocals and sent it to salook who added to the mix and finished up the production..we hit a speed bump and lost some stems during the process...so we didnt get a chance to go back and finish up the mix but this was the best take before the misshap ...hope you can enjoy

feel free to check out our more recent collab project https://soundcloud.com/lurcher-1

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give cosmicinfluence some feedback.

Spivkurl
Spivkurl 16th Jan 2014 20:11 - 11 years ago
This is excellent! I love Salook's work, and the two of you seem to work well together! It's a really groovy dub sounding composition, and I like that! Your vocals are killer! Personally I think the reverb sounds nice for this style, and the bass stands out pretty well on my system. Thanks for sharing!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 22nd Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
thanks for the input spiv. always nice to get posetive feedback.
anthonyabutler32
anthonyabutler32 9th Jan 2014 04:09 - 11 years ago
This track is real good. lol, I really enjoyed hearing it...
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 9th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
thanks bro. i really enjoyed making it too.
lazyeye1261
lazyeye1261 8th Jan 2014 23:55 - 11 years ago
Nice.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 9th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
cheers friend.
monsterage
monsterage 8th Jan 2014 22:47 - 11 years ago
I agreed with Static aswell. if you get fix the mix and vocals you gonna have a great song, Play with dynamics and try to stereo some of the instruments so it doesn't sound like its fighting with the vocals and verb.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 9th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
advice took onboard my friend. will come back to it at a later stage but i have lost some of the stems. thanks for the input. graham
Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic 8th Jan 2014 19:31 - 11 years ago
Beautiful and soulful song. Great melody, good voice... good work!
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 8th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
thanks very much. i like it. this is one of the ones i would like to go back to once i gain some experience and turn it from a good little tune into a really great track. thanks again. graham
crucethus
crucethus 5th Jan 2014 21:40 - 11 years ago
I agree with Static that the mix needs some improvement and less re-verb, but it has promise, sort of an old-school trip-hop song I think?
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 5th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
thanks for the feedback bro. defo take on board what people are saying and try to improve. watch this space lol
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 5th Jan 2014 01:06 - 11 years ago
Hi. I prefer your vocals on this one to the Moment With You vocals. It's quite a strong, simple line and sounds relaxed and not as though you're forcing it.

First big problem is the reverb on the vocals. Just doesn't quite sound right though not terrible.

More of a problem is the mix. Too much movement, too busy, too crowded.

I like the simple dub bass but we're not getting to hear it enough due to the crowded mix.

Strip down (maybe remove) some of the percussive loops and/or take some of the reverb off them.

I like the guitar on 0:23.

Overall, I think it's a decent chill dub track but needs to be stripped down. I'd also like it to progress into something else because, as it is, it feels too long. That's probably because there's not enough variety.

Use of the guitar is good. Some more of that would help give it a more distinctive character and identity.

Good luck if you and Salook are able to continue working on it.
cosmicinfluence
cosmicinfluence replied 5th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
thanks again for the honest feedback stacic. once again duely noted. on this occasion i quite like the businees but its all reletive and thats why we do this. i will bear your'e points in mind for future productions. as a matter of fact i have just started something kinda similar so i will be aware not to make it quite so full. cheers again bro.

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