Description : ***EDIT***
Version 2.0 Uploaded: Added some reverb to blend in vocals a bit.
Thanks to all the nice Looper-People offering comments, pointers and advice.
Bloody Brilliant work! You definately captured that Vince Clark sound, (Yaz, depeche mode, erasure), and Bonnie's voice works well she sounds a bit like Johnette Napolitano from Concrete Blonde. Good work!
Steve
Hello Steve,
Thanks for your nice comments -I really appreciate it. Im not familiar with Concrete Blonde but i will definiately check them out later this evening. Take care and keep up the good things you do :)
oh yes...a great vocal indeed but must say you really wrapped it up perfectly with the accompaniment...love the intro AggroCultureMusic...and it gets even better after that....really well done....Ed
Hello Ed,
Thanks for your nice comment - It means a lot to me and also Thank you for sharing "Something Blue" its imho one of the best tracks I've listened to on this site.
Thumps up !
Hello Spivkurl,
Thanks for the nice review i'm glad that you like the track.
PS: Some of your tracks made last night a very loud and enjoyable experience :)
I fully agree with BrillBilly: the song structure is perfect. The arrangement I would say you can only improve the mix/eq, and Billy had a good advice here.
Personally, I would apply different amount of reverb/delay for the quiet parts and the parts where you have more going on in the background.
Overall... wonderful song! Really professional. Respect.
Domenico
PS: I simply love the small vocal bit which you have in the beginning with a lot of echoes
Hello Domenico,
Thanks for commenting and giving me some pro advice. Im currently fiddling around for the first time with some reverbs and levelers on the vocals... and YEP you're absolutely right: Different reverb on the quiet parts is definiately the way to go (just found out through extensive testing).
So hopefully with the advice from the nice Looper-people taking the time commenting and guide the noob Ill be able to upload a version 2.0 soon :D
Hello Amethyst,
Thank you for listening and commenting. I've just been listening to some of your work and must say that praise from an artist such as you is an honour. Thanks :)
Thanks for listening and commenting :). I tend to have some difficulties in deciding when a track is finished but on this one the feedback I've recieved is pointing me towards keeping the structures and focus on eq's and teach myself how to use effects on Pro Tools :D
That has that great old school Eurythmics/Yazoo type vibe!
That was really enjoyable!
The only thing i would do if this was my production, is add more reverb/echo on the vocals to just blend them in more,but thats just what i would do, and in know way am i saying i know better!
Good work,I really liked that,so thumbs up from me! ;)
Hey
I'm so glad that you liked it. Comparing the vibe to 2 of my musical "heroes" is an honour.
Im still a newbie to protools and production and still have some work to do on this track. Ill look into putting some reverb on the vocals and see how that pans out.
So, Thank you for the constructive comment and thumbs up returned :)
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
anyway i listened to your work and I loved it :)
Here is my classical version :)
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/144786
I'm a beginner so all comments and advices would be greatly appreciated
Love it.
Steve
Thanks for your nice comments -I really appreciate it. Im not familiar with Concrete Blonde but i will definiately check them out later this evening. Take care and keep up the good things you do :)
Cheers
Peter
Thanks for your nice comment - It means a lot to me and also Thank you for sharing "Something Blue" its imho one of the best tracks I've listened to on this site.
Thumps up !
/P
Thanks for the nice review i'm glad that you like the track.
PS: Some of your tracks made last night a very loud and enjoyable experience :)
/P
Thanks a lot for commenting on the track - Just checked out some of your work earlier today ....Man you're a PRO !.
Respect !
/P
Thanks for listening and Commenting - I really appreciate it :)
/P
Personally, I would apply different amount of reverb/delay for the quiet parts and the parts where you have more going on in the background.
Overall... wonderful song! Really professional. Respect.
Domenico
PS: I simply love the small vocal bit which you have in the beginning with a lot of echoes
Thanks for commenting and giving me some pro advice. Im currently fiddling around for the first time with some reverbs and levelers on the vocals... and YEP you're absolutely right: Different reverb on the quiet parts is definiately the way to go (just found out through extensive testing).
So hopefully with the advice from the nice Looper-people taking the time commenting and guide the noob Ill be able to upload a version 2.0 soon :D
PS: Your track ft Farisha Haque is Superb !
^P
OUTSTANDING. I love the beat keeps a warm flow all the way
thanks for sharing
Thank you for listening and commenting. I've just been listening to some of your work and must say that praise from an artist such as you is an honour. Thanks :)
/P
Good stuff.
Thanks for listening and commenting :). I tend to have some difficulties in deciding when a track is finished but on this one the feedback I've recieved is pointing me towards keeping the structures and focus on eq's and teach myself how to use effects on Pro Tools :D
/P
Yep you nailed it!
That has that great old school Eurythmics/Yazoo type vibe!
That was really enjoyable!
The only thing i would do if this was my production, is add more reverb/echo on the vocals to just blend them in more,but thats just what i would do, and in know way am i saying i know better!
Good work,I really liked that,so thumbs up from me! ;)
I'm so glad that you liked it. Comparing the vibe to 2 of my musical "heroes" is an honour.
Im still a newbie to protools and production and still have some work to do on this track. Ill look into putting some reverb on the vocals and see how that pans out.
So, Thank you for the constructive comment and thumbs up returned :)
/P
If this is just a demo, Im intrigued to hear the finished product!
Thank you for sharing!
Peace!
I'll send you a video of the tune on FB for sharing - Keep up the excellent work.
/P