3 Seasons - Critiques Welcomed - Josiahgr

15th Apr 2013 23:56 - 13 years ago
Description : Hey everyone! This is my first time posting on here. I am just looking for feedback/critique :) This is still very much in its early stages.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give Josiahgr some feedback.

Mykael
Mykael 16th Apr 2013 02:57 - 13 years ago
Over all your track has amazing energy. The intro seemed a bit disconnected from the rest of the piece. Maybe a difference in tempo? I think if could sort out that one component you'd end up with a very tight track.
isaiasal68
isaiasal68 16th Apr 2013 02:08 - 13 years ago
VERY VERY GOOD
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 16th Apr 2013 01:11 - 13 years ago
You know what - the pianopart that starts in the middle was just fantastic! Is it you playing by any chance?
That made the hole song for me. The beginning up to the pianopart maybe needs some more of something, but I'm not an expert at all so can't really give you any advice.
Love the piano! Great job with that.

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