Strange Addiction- Isla Grace -Piano Shortbusmusic - Beckstar

6th Mar 2013 23:31 - 13 years ago
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Description : Hey guys, This is my first track I have recorded if you could have a listen and give me any feedback would be much appreciated :)

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Beckstar some feedback.

ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 9th Mar 2013 01:46 - 13 years ago
I agree with a a lot of the comments. Your tone is really nice and your voice has a really nice sound to it. I agree with others that you are off key in a few spots, i would really like you to practice and rerecord it because the melody with the piano is fantastic. Keep practicing you definitely have some talent waiting to come bursting out.

Kyle
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 14th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Thank you. I am now singing non stop and I will rerecord when I have mastered it :)
djvosha
djvosha 8th Mar 2013 16:33 - 13 years ago
Nice effort....
Would require a little toch with vocals,
and probably light drums can spice it into
a complete track.
Keep it up.
cheers!!!
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 14th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
I agree. Thank you for your feedback :)
deciBel
deciBel 7th Mar 2013 12:04 - 13 years ago
well & maybe I first should say ''wellcome'' .
I think alittle more attention & cretitude & training on solfeggio , could considerably make your heartful & beauty lyrics , more impressive . althought & anyway it's very better than my first track .regards.__Behnam
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 7th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks heaps and yes I definitely need a bit more training :)
srbrown7
srbrown7 7th Mar 2013 11:09 - 13 years ago
I really like your singing style, relaxed and whimsical and you have good tone. Just a few parts your pitch was a touch flat but that can be due to the environment you're recording in or nerves! I am currently working on a piece where I just talk into a vocoder and I still get nerves. Takes courage to put yourself out there so keep it up. Agree with Mrwolf. We could help with the accompaniment if you put out an acapella. Thanks for sharing!
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 7th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Cheers, I know there is a big pitch stuff up at the start lol but I keep trying to re-record it and it just keeps coming out the same. Think I will work on my vocals a bit and do the acapella. I generally like the lyric writing side the most and I am only starting at the vocals and mixing side.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 7th Mar 2013 10:31 - 13 years ago
Hi Beckstar, very good start! Lovely song!
Maybe if you upload the acapella of this song you may find someone willing to re-arrange it: I like the atmosphere, but I think it would require a bit more than the piano as background.
Keep the good work!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: by the way, the piano loop from Bear is wonderful! But that's no surprise to me.
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 7th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks and I completely agree. I tried a few things but they didn't work out so I will take you advice.
CronicDoom
CronicDoom 7th Mar 2013 10:11 - 13 years ago
hey nice track do you do your own producing? i like the vibe with a time i feel you will become a very good artist :) keep up the good work and let your heart guide your music..
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 7th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks. Its just me in my office and I'm just starting out so haven't really figured out much yet.
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 7th Mar 2013 05:58 - 13 years ago
Hello Beckstar, In my opinion your voice sounds really good with that piano. What I hear sounds familiar in a way and gets me wondering. Your vocal melody gives me ideas, real catchy Beckstar. Pretty good so far on this track. Nice and chill. Dig the lyrics. Has a feeling of caught in the past. Thanks for sharing with us. Keep going. Peace.
Beckstar
Beckstar replied 7th Mar 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks heaps for your comment. Bit nervous starting out so your comment meant heaps to me.
Cheers

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