Ex Friend Demo - Projectjehobith

27th Feb 2012 04:03 - 14 years ago
Description : Scroll down to read the lyrics.
This is my most recent project. It is 90 percent complete. I created the drums in beatcraft. I need some advice on my vocals. This is hard rock, killer guitar, bass, and drums. I can't wait to finish it and let you all hear the final mastered track.

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give projectjehobith some feedback.

rei4real
rei4real 28th Feb 2012 16:19 - 14 years ago
I pretty much agree with Mahloo ...
the sound of the guitars is really good so far, the arrangement and the composition are top!!
to your questions: 1. words are clear (I'm no english native speaker but I didn't need the written words to understand the lyrics, so ...), 2. you're not on key a little bit too often, 3. that's a matter of taste I guess, for my personal flavor they're a little bit too loud, yes, but just a little bit, 4. record a couple of different versions, so you get a better feeling for what to do when while singing ...

that's my two cents ;-)

peace, rei
Mahloo13
Mahloo13 27th Feb 2012 06:08 - 14 years ago
There are some pitch issues with the vocal and they tend to be distracting.

The track is really nice though honestly I would have liked the guitars a bit wider on some sections where there are multiple ones playing. It might be just a subtle change.

As I've said the track is really really cool but you need to fix those vocals. The distortion on the vocals also seemed a bit to much to me.

Hopefully you find this useful!

Cheers!
projectjehobith
projectjehobith replied 27th Feb 2012 - 14 years ago
yes this helps. ty

need opinions on:

1. Is my words clear?
2. Am I on key?
3. Are the vocals too loud?
4. should i delete the vocal track and re do it?

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