Hope Must End - Sammmm

15th Jul 2008 14:42 - 18 years ago
Description : Credits to Zappy Poptronica by BasicAtheist

Just a rough draft type thing,just got a new program,still learning what all i can do in it.

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what have you ruined?
a shadow of sickness as emotions twist.
once we enjoyed heaven,
innocent and childlike,
but your desire died.
a dark pool of lies -
memories follow rain, follow hate,
love torn apart.
in a haze of vengeance,

Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the headsman's axe falls against my neck.
It mutilates me, and darkly my
essence drips
to the broken ground.
In numbness I call your name
while the Reaper takes me.
Now alone, my soul falls upon uncaring eyes.

This is death

the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, lost are we.
the god for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
crushed by your obsession.
all hope must end.

your heart beats no more.
how could you not understand?
we have lost our light.
we have lost our way

Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the headsman's axe falls against my neck.
It mutilates me, and darkly my
essence drips
to the broken ground.
In numbness I call your name
while the Reaper takes me.
Now alone, my soul falls upon uncaring eyes.

This is death

the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, lost are we.
the god for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
crushed by your obsession.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give sammmm some feedback.

Mokeone
Mokeone 13th Aug 2008 22:25 - 18 years ago
Well done. What a great opening song for a concept album about the end of hope & final destruction of mankind. The abrupt end was called for in this piece. It fits nicely with "all hope must end". I'd be interested in hearing what comes next in this story. mokeone
StarTropix
StarTropix 17th Jul 2008 01:44 - 18 years ago
jackrussel.

i feel the same way.

that ending was good
MonsieurDongBag
MonsieurDongBag 15th Jul 2008 20:58 - 18 years ago
That orchestral synth pad was used to perfection. Love the way the beat builds and how you pull back and make it a bit more drum-centric towards the end of the track.

On another note, I know a lot of people don't share this emotion but I kinda like it when tracks just end abruptly.

Nice track, dude.
sammmm
sammmm replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the reveiw,the beat was done by BasicAtheist,I've always had problems with ending's on songs..stories.etc so they ussaly end abruptly

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