Master Of Space - 3 Minute Sample - Marius9

As is, it sounds pretty good to me (would make it a lil longer though).

As for suggestions...
First if this is about ESP and/or divinity I'd personally try to move some elements of this in a Progresse/Goa-Psy Trance direction. To include some screechy synth FX or acidic sounding synth (disregard those suggestions if you are trying to go with more of a Italo/Dream Trance vibe).
Second, with the cosmos/universe aspect of the description I would consider adding more Reverb with a slight decayed Echo (like ya got going on with that one synth sequence) on top of the different parts of the mix, so you can interchange between applying the effect in different spots (from, say, all at the beginning/end to only having them on just the bass here and just the choir synths there, and so on). Though, if you were trying to go with a more dynamic style sound, what I'd do is only add the reverb-echo slightly to all of the instrumentation (say at 15-30 percent). Then I'd bump them up on the vocals (ie, around 50-60 percent) since the song is supposed to be a man with these powers (in effect, turning your vocalist into that man, if it's a guy singin that is). Also consider playing around with going between the raw sounding vocals with stuff that has vocoded effects on 'em (creating a contrast between the man's inner-self and his two persona's, ie, one that's cosmic & powerful and another that's normal and introspective). Just some ideas to play with there. Sounds like you're def heading in the right direction with this. Keep bangin on mate. Lates!