Be It Ft Gaffattack - ChaseManhattan

Sup chase! ha it looks like you chose gaffs beat from the loop challenge i had a while ago. i really that beat too. anyways but yea homie it seems like you rush alot of your tracks man, especially vocally wise. The vocals are really dry and non-present. And you could work on your flow alot more man. With even "one" verse i usually do on average maybe 50 takes. i don't like to be off time or have any imperfections. A little more emotion couldn't hurt either homie! The beat is right on, but you could of tackled it more efficiently. nonetheless this is just my honest critiquing bro, don't stop for the half-way. aint no such thing as a half-way "rap". lol regards and respect brudda

Neobane

Smooth to the ears just like i like!

Every time I hear this tune it just gets better and better, good vocal lay too.

Homie you spit the truth...I feel it.

You need to promote yourself more...

Posting your stuff only on looperman...Won't get you what you deserve.
Make some videos on youtube,post videos on myspace,create a FaceBook account...Do things like that.

Regards

HaruTune

nice track..beat fits the flo nice..like yo style,laid back and flowey..keep it up man!

Not bad....you remind me of John McCrea of Cake with the vocals....

This isn't half bad, but I beleive that you should work on your word play nad your flow. That would be a major improvement to your songs.