Atomic Blow (v2) - Dagoth

This is pretty good! If you get a better mic and know and how mix and such:)

HAHA
cool man,

i like what u've done wid my beat here, glad u like it :)

keep it up
theFISHface

raw talent, need to work on the production side of things first. i like the lyrics though with some time and effort you could have some nice tracks.

I know you can do a lot better so don't quit for NO body OK ! look it's simple try to practice tapping your feet 4 TIMES IN THE FLOOR when you're going to rap a song this will keep you in timing with the track.Another thing when you recor your voice in any mic never sing to close to it ( why )? because it will CLIP ( clipping is when the volume red line hit the red part you don't want that ) remember it dosent matter how low you record the software can always bring up or down the volume of the track if your doing some Editing, try to learn how to edit song in a recording software use anyone you like ( MAGIX,ACID.SOUND FORGE EXCT ) there are a lot of them in the NET so you pick one and start editin simple stuff so you can learn then how to edit your stuff ok my friend ' GOOD LUCK '

what do u use to make your tracks? you really should learn how to edit, mix and master or send it to someone who does, and u should also invest in a good mic and a space to record.. im not trying to play you, but it just really really sounds like you didnt put much "work" into it... learn and grow my fellow artist