THROWBACK Rap By Skriblej Demo By Lanfran - Lanfran

23rd Apr 2011 14:47 - 15 years ago
Description : loved skriblej's rap so i threw some music to it quick lol i like it i want to add moooooore

what do you ya'll think????

from SkribleJ: this is an unfinished song. This is part of a song I did with ThePhilosofist, but he has not finished his part; he is still working on it. But for the time being, I just wanted to show you guys how I spit. Do what you please with it, just let me know when you're done! Thank you!

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give lanfran some feedback.

SkribleJ
SkribleJ 27th Apr 2011 23:30 - 15 years ago
DUDE. The vocal effect really took over the song.
I like the effect, it's just that it's not what I intended for the vocals to be used for.
I like the beat, but it's more of dance/ trance.
You need to work on how you mix the vocals onto an instrumental, but other than that, I think you did a decent job with it!
Remember I'm not being mean, just giving you some constructive criticism.
-Skrib
lanfran
lanfran replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
sry was high when made it ill upload a new version tonight and see how long it takes looperman to update
Khrys
Khrys 23rd Apr 2011 23:56 - 15 years ago
Music is good but the vocals need better quality
lanfran
lanfran replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hmm did you listen to his orignal rap acapella?

http://www.looperman.com/plaayer.php?aid=2531

Thank you for praising my production but its his vocals. i think they aren't too bad i like the lyrics enough and the rapping is pretty good so i thought I'd tweak it out and make it wild. Idk i want to hear a lot of opinions. i plan to make an intro and outro as well as throw in a female or male singing a few hooks in the middle before the next rap section. I usually do acoustic or punk or emo music but this was a first for me I'm brushing up my hip hop skills with my own style to it. like people complained there wasn't a heavy enough beat but there doesn't need to be. that's cookie-cutter. i aim to make music different and interesting.

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