JazzMEup - Updated - TheFISHface

18th Apr 2011 21:43 - 15 years ago
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Description : I took some advice from @Filaofsoul and he said:

"Nice choice of instruments you have here! Suggestion I would now try and stretch this track to 2 minutes maybe open with the drums for about 10 sec or 4 bars then add bass let it groove for 10 sec or another 4 bars then start building your tune from there!! Give it a try
Filaofsoul "

so i did and heres what i came up with :)

hope u like it
theFISHface

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give theFISHface some feedback.

Filaofsoul
Filaofsoul 20th Apr 2011 14:18 - 15 years ago
13 great age to get the groove on! The remix it really getting there. Abner's advice is spot on. A little unbalanced up to 1:13 but the loop you use at 1:13 could be the hook that you need. Also from 1:13 your song starts to take shape. Dont over use to many guitar riffs and organ riffs at the same time. (Beginning) The beginning is excellent to :15 again listen from 1:13 a see how nice and settled it is! It could be your opening. Think of this as a song book (Beginning)(Middle)(End) and take your time. Keep up the good work. Fila
theFISHface
theFISHface replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
this is really great to have so much great advice, I'm defiantly taking it on board, thank u heaps for guiding me and god bless,

theFISHface
Kgomotso
Kgomotso 20th Apr 2011 06:50 - 15 years ago
This great staff. I agree with Abner that the track is short and off beat here and the but other you are great. Keep going you will definately get beter day by day. Good luck and God bless
theFISHface
theFISHface replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks Heaps

cheers
theFISHface
abnerbesares
abnerbesares 18th Apr 2011 23:36 - 15 years ago
You did a good job and my view was that you are getting the idea in jazz BUT ! i found some off beat in the intro from the Drum sect and i find that the song is still to short.See in this Genre of jazz the are no rules BUT' then again the a rules, if you star a song you must remember that your doing music only no vocals and you need to focus on a catchy frease or loop that identifies the song so that when the human ears listens to it, start to loop in the continent.I you finish the song to soon people wont appreciate what already started, Well hope you understand my point,Good luck my friend.
theFISHface
theFISHface replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
THANK U SO MUCH!!

I'm only 13 and i have heaps to learn about music. It's great when someone gives me some great solid advice.

thanks alot mate
theFISHface

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