The Stars(Work In Progress) - DJSampletank

2nd Apr 2011 18:35 - 15 years ago
Description : Again, I found the drum samples here.

I like this song so any constructive critiscm given would be gravy, much appreciated.

Comments (2)

If you have time take a listen and give DJSampletank some feedback.

spliffyc
spliffyc 27th Apr 2011 16:48 - 15 years ago
Sounds Good! The Vocals at 00:31 Need To Be Lowered Just Abit cuz i can here the background noise not at its full peak.

Try Going Off Course With The Melody And Chords and Bass.... It'll Change The Impact Of The Song!
DJSampletank
DJSampletank replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the input man, I'll keep that in mind for the next time I work on it.
ResistanceIsFutile
ResistanceIsFutile 9th Apr 2011 23:28 - 15 years ago
Sometimes it's hard to offer up real constructive criticism, even when it's being asked for because your perception and expectation of your work is different to mine.
Personally I'm not entirely sure about the spoken part all the way through, but that's just my feelings about it. Let the music speak for itself and use the vocal sparingly would be the best advice I can give.
Good work so far though :)
DJSampletank
DJSampletank replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks my man. Vocal samples, often spanning the full track are deep rooted in my 'style' if I have one, but I'll keep it in mind, try to better myself. Again, cheers man.

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