The only thing I really can say is that the synth in the beginning doesn't really fit too well, and ends very abruptly. You've got a good sound going on here, don't let it die. Build upon this beast until he's a war-torn steed! This has great possibilities man, put them to good use!
thanks for your comment. i think it is a good idea to rethink the synth in this track. i will update you about this song. Still looking for my own style, sometimes it is near and yet so far, but that is the challenge. again thanks
That's the first thing that I thought of when I clicked play. It's a nice little track, though I do have a few suggestions. I don't know if you were trying to just upload a small clip of what you were working on, but put a little more effort into it before uploading it, you'll get MUCH more feedback from your listeners, and you'll feel a whole lot more accomplished too. As for the actual track itself, you have a good sound going, BUILD UPON IT! There's no reason to stop now, you've got the flow going!
And make sure you put VARIATION in it. There's nothing more substantial to a song than keeping your listeners interested.
For one of your first tracks, I must admit it's sort of catchy. It's well composed, and it's got good levels all around. The panning is pretty cool too. Beyond the instruments sounding like they were played through a 3-inch speaker, I thoroughly enjoyed this little piece.
Ah, love finding more people that use Reason. Here's my suggestion with this one: Separate the instruments to get a more vibrant sound, rather than the "looping" sound you have right now. Though if you were going for this exact sound, then it works well. Either way, I like the overall scene you put in this track. Try getting some variation with the strings along with the drums too!
Agreed with Minor, this is an awesome track, everything you have works really well with each other, the only suggestion that I'd have is fattening up the guitar a bit, either with adjust the bass, or recording more tracks of it. Although sometimes the hardware you have may limit this, it's all good. In a perfect world, I'd know how to mix my songs too. :P
Hell yeah man, this track sounds a tad classically influenced, and I love it. A lot of my music is made with a lot of the same aspect, you should give my stuff a try and see what you think. As much as I like this track, give it some more variation rather than just adding more. Completely stop in one area of your track, and start in a completely different way, but in the same key. Then, find a good transition between the two, and BAM. You got yourself a verse.
Hey again Centrist - I'm really glad you're posting comments, its good to see that people like what one is creating :)
Have a great morning/day/evening mate :)
I like all of what you have going on here, very original, very cool, very touching. THOUGH! My one beef with this track is that the phase/wah thing you have going on there completely overlaps your voice, and as the user above me said, that you DO have a nice voice, therefore it shouldn't be hidden behind a loud phaser. Turn that down a little bit so we can hear you, and you'll have a favorite from me.
Being a huge fan and artist in the whole "epic cinematic" style of music, I have to say that I do like this. I like it a lot, actually. One think I think you may be able to improve on is the smoothness when you switch loops/samples/whatever you use. It's a little chunky, but that gets better in due time. In any case, well done.
Might I suggest a little reverb on the bells? It's like depth perception in a video game, the bells are right in front of you so they're clear as day, though all the other instruments have a voice aswell, just not as clear. You can bring out those voices just by dampening the other.
Very cool, don't find much like this on Looperman. The only thing that I can really suggest is to put a screen, or a sock or something over the microphone when you record so you don't get each breath in the recording.
Other than that, you've got something brilliant here. Well done!
Hey there, thanks for the tip. I have recently also discovered a "de-esser" setting on my Line6 Tone Port - which I try and use to "clean up" my vocals. And also, considering I record it all in my bedroom, I don't expect it to sound flawless. But thanks for the tip - will def. try it
out.
Being into orchestral and all that type of stuff, I love this track. I have to agree with Siensystem though, the instruments have a touch bit too much reverb on them, but all in all you made this exactly as the title describes. Epic, heroic, and amazing.
It sounds pretty good, though I'd make the progression a tad bit softer, in essence meaning that when you change the way the song changes instrument chords or styles, make the transition a bit easier into each other. This will help your song flow and not make the listener confused as to what is happening. When you have hard mixes like that, it takes us a second to realize what is going on.
I like what you have already a lot, though there is one thing that I think you need to do. Play around with some instruments! Get some timpani drums in there, add some horns, bells, whistles, whatever. Though like I said before, you have something with real potential going, and I enjoyed it quite a bit.
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The only thing I really can say is that the synth in the beginning doesn't really fit too well, and ends very abruptly. You've got a good sound going on here, don't let it die. Build upon this beast until he's a war-torn steed! This has great possibilities man, put them to good use!
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That's the first thing that I thought of when I clicked play. It's a nice little track, though I do have a few suggestions. I don't know if you were trying to just upload a small clip of what you were working on, but put a little more effort into it before uploading it, you'll get MUCH more feedback from your listeners, and you'll feel a whole lot more accomplished too. As for the actual track itself, you have a good sound going, BUILD UPON IT! There's no reason to stop now, you've got the flow going!
And make sure you put VARIATION in it. There's nothing more substantial to a song than keeping your listeners interested.
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Well done mate.
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BUT I LIKE IT. It's very gothic and interesting. :o
This is something I'd want to play guitar to. It's got a really good drum sequence (whether it's a loop or not). Well done!
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Brilliant arrangement of sounds, usually I'd wave my finger at repetitive loops, but this is brilliant. I want more!
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I like this a lot, and I'm very impressed with your vocals. Not many people here lay down some lyrics, and you sir, have done brilliantly.
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Other than that, sick as hell man. Well done.
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Other than that, you've got something brilliant here. Well done!
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Awesome lead and main flow. Had me bobbing when it really got going.
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Keep it up!