I am totally impressed by how innovative the musical composition is on this!! I am not as impressed with my vocals on it or the way it was placed. I think you should get rid of them as it takes away from the music! It doesn't quite fit the mood I feel. Loving the sounds on this wow!
I am sorry that you don't feel like your vocals fit in there just right, I have a tendency to be that way to make things that don't seem just quite right co-exist.
If you insist I will post redo the track without the vocals but I actually do like it, maybe it is a sign of how we tend to be our own biggest critics.
Love how you chopped this vocal up as another instrument in the overall composition, rather than just laying the original over as is. Also enjoyed the musical setting. I wonder how much more this could expand if you pulled from other pella as well, using the same creative approach to decorate the track.
Thanks for the warm words. I try to give my best, but this is just a demo track. Could be nice if you can upload more "I wish" vocals. Then the song would be complete.
Wow you get better and better everytime I hear you! Way to go! This flows like gold, spectacular!! Not enough good things to say about it. You own this genre!
hi! I enjoyed this, well done for the electro genre and even more surprising given your age. You have a good ear for volume levels and I was really impressed by the different elements you tucked into this, to avoid the repetition. Excited to hear more of your work!
Majestic? Nobody has ever used that word to describe one of my songs, now I'm feeling pretty good about myself, lol!! Thanks for checking it out and using the word majestic. ;) Glad you liked it enough to dl it.
I'm very impressed with how radio ready this sounds. I feel the music is just a tad too loud for her vocals or her vocals need another layer to not be drowned out (I don't have headphones on so just on my comp speakers this is is how it seems). Other than that, this flows exactly how you'd hear a popular pop song sound today! 5 star!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I definitely was aiming for something more like a radio sound so I'm happy to hear it worked out! The vocals could definitely be tweaked now that you mention it. Thank you for leaving feedback!
Wow this packs a powerful punch!! I love writenow and your musical composition is hella amazing and crystal clear. I would have liked to see you link WriteNow's profile, so I'll do it for you: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148431
If I can ever finish the one I'm working on of yours right now (getting frustrated by the acoustics of the room changing with my move and feeling limited on effects), I would love the honor of recording over more of your work. I hope I am improving to some degree to be worthy enough to add (and not take away) from your art.
Always enjoy reading what emotions you feel when you make a song, because this helps in creating lyrics. I have never heard an average track from you Bruno, your work is always the best.
I don't mix well or know audio from a professional standpoint- but some parts of this sounds muddy and might be peaking a bit, distorting the sound. Distorting can be a cool trick, if used in moderation. However, it can also aggravate the ears when used too much. I like the idea and "skeleton"/ framework here, I'd love to hear a cleaned up version.
It's easy for stuff to get buried here on the Loop, with so many uploads flooding in on a daily basis. I love this work I hear. I'd love to follow you on Soundcloud, if you have one.
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I am sorry that you don't feel like your vocals fit in there just right, I have a tendency to be that way to make things that don't seem just quite right co-exist.
If you insist I will post redo the track without the vocals but I actually do like it, maybe it is a sign of how we tend to be our own biggest critics.
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Thanks jj,glad your still kickin with it!
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Always enjoy reading what emotions you feel when you make a song, because this helps in creating lyrics. I have never heard an average track from you Bruno, your work is always the best.
And of course you should feel free to use any of my work on your singings, you have a beautiful voice girl!!!
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