Finally something nice in the pile of sucky tracks! I am also curious to hear your vocals without autotune, and I'd love to hear you sing over a more varied track. However this sample definitely showed off your lyrical and vocal talent- want more!
I don't get the lyrics, but hell if that matters- your voice has completely drawn me in. I love the double vocal layers mixed with the acoustics, totally in love with your sound. Please post more content, you've got a fan!! Those drums, oh my.
This is really full of sound, very lush. Lots of great elements in this to change up the pace and intrigue the listener. Thanks for sharing this journey with us! What a fun journey it is!
Love it, very beautiful and has a great structure for vocals. Also set up perfectly to tell a story- God's story. Lecrae is one of my favorite Christian/Religious groups, but my favorite song in this genre is by Lyrycyst "Deny Him".
Drawn in right away by this chill musical vibe, I actually like the musical composition much better than the vocals and feel this particular piece needs custom made lyrics (though I am unable to offer at the time). Enjoyed the listen!
Thanks so much for your words, i'm glad to share my first upload with you on looperman ! this one is full of sub-bass so i hope you have listened to it with a subwoofer, it makes sens and balance with harmony and chords but anyway i have to get more bass on little speakers and improve my mastering's skills... Love your voice ! keep in touch JJ !
Hey Jenny, how are you:) As for me I'm chillin here rebuilding my studio piece by piece. Slowly but surely. If you can, when you have the baby let us know. I'm thinking it's gonna be a girl:P
Thank you for listening and for the support. I know that I put that last song I did with your vocals to private, but I wasn't happy with the mixdown. As soon as I'm done with it I'll shoot you a message to let you hear it.
Vocally, this could use to be rehearsed a couple more times, to eliminate some of the shakiness. Sometimes you start off beat and off tempo, but I also hear a lot of great tone in this. Overall, I would layer up your voice again in an editor so it's stronger or sing with slightly more confidence. You can still sing soft while gathering up some "grrr" in your low tone.
The dialog weirded me out a bit, wasn't really sure what was going on there and honestly sounded pedo-bear creepy to me. If I wrote this, I would have shortened the dialogue and eliminated some of the lines (which come off a bit cheesy and bit cliche), though I admire the art in adding this element.
I did immensely enjoy the acoustic part and your low talking voice in the beginning, as well as the mysterious rock style often found in Metallica and or even System of a Down's song Hypnotize.
I'm definitely following your progress on here, because you drew me in with those pellas you posted. I still feel we have yet to hear something from you which lives up to your profile description: "I've been lyrically gifted from an early age..."
Show me ;-) Accept the challenge. I'll be waiting for your next upload.
I've listened to all your songs on your page...and some are hit or miss, in my honest opinion. I feel if more time were taken on them, you could come back to each project and add more...though I understand in my own projects being incredibly impatient. Without knowing you, I'd say I hear some improvement over the course of time, likely largely due to the pace of content you produce. As you make more, maybe you can slow down a bit and further harness a musical direction. Many of these tracks sound like ideas waiting to be expounded upon, yet feel incomplete. This track though- it rocks!!! Definitely a great electro
Hey thanks for listening.
You are absolutely right more work on the composition/production would be best for the song. This song is from last year but some others are even more old, they are like old projects never completed so I make demo tracks off them. nothing special, just a sample...
One thing, I think a couple of months ago I used one of your voice samples on one track maybe I'll re-edit and upload it here, just to share it.
Greetings.
Wow what a beauty this track is!! I am not even wearing headphones at the moment and it sounds fantastic on my computer lapdesk speakers!! I appreciate that I can download this and will be exploring your other tracks. I see you joined 6 months ago- welcome to Looperman and keep it up!!
Drawn in right away. I think you should cut out the drum "metronome" at the beginning and just launch in right at 4 seconds. I really like how this has some different sections for a vocalist, because the drumline starts to get a bit repetitive until 48 seconds. The transition from the regular drumline to the new one at 48 seconds and also the one at 2:12 threw me off a bit- like it didn't quite fall on time...maybe this is an acquired taste. Between 1:51 and 1:52 it delays just a bit and some parts following. Love the guitar at 2:27- wanna hear more of that throughout, with more variation.
Since this is still in progress, I encourage you to play around more with the guitar side of things.
This track is awesome, I was totally making up lyrics to it as I listened and felt some Nirvana in there. Get wild with it, break away from the pattern of the drums a bit more and let your inner rocker out!! This track is well on its way!! Could easily hear a finished product with some lyrics on the rock radio station.
In my opinion, vocally, the transitions at 48 seconds and 2:12 could use some whispered lyrics. Some of the chorus spots could use some ambient yelling or screams.
I'm glad your liking what I have so far, and thanks so much for listening and checking it out, and yea I'm still messing around with this song, thanks for the feedback, first person to ever give detailed criticism that's quite helpful lol and yea I agree with you on the feedback, I have to keeping working on it. Drums are pretty repetitive hah man I need to get new drum sticks mine broke just recently .
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Exactly what we wanted to produce, a track full of sounds but providing fun too. Thanks for listening and your really nice comments.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
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Thank you for listening and for the support. I know that I put that last song I did with your vocals to private, but I wasn't happy with the mixdown. As soon as I'm done with it I'll shoot you a message to let you hear it.
Until then, take care.
Steve.
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The dialog weirded me out a bit, wasn't really sure what was going on there and honestly sounded pedo-bear creepy to me. If I wrote this, I would have shortened the dialogue and eliminated some of the lines (which come off a bit cheesy and bit cliche), though I admire the art in adding this element.
I did immensely enjoy the acoustic part and your low talking voice in the beginning, as well as the mysterious rock style often found in Metallica and or even System of a Down's song Hypnotize.
I'm definitely following your progress on here, because you drew me in with those pellas you posted. I still feel we have yet to hear something from you which lives up to your profile description: "I've been lyrically gifted from an early age..."
Show me ;-) Accept the challenge. I'll be waiting for your next upload.
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You are absolutely right more work on the composition/production would be best for the song. This song is from last year but some others are even more old, they are like old projects never completed so I make demo tracks off them. nothing special, just a sample...
One thing, I think a couple of months ago I used one of your voice samples on one track maybe I'll re-edit and upload it here, just to share it.
Greetings.
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Since this is still in progress, I encourage you to play around more with the guitar side of things.
This track is awesome, I was totally making up lyrics to it as I listened and felt some Nirvana in there. Get wild with it, break away from the pattern of the drums a bit more and let your inner rocker out!! This track is well on its way!! Could easily hear a finished product with some lyrics on the rock radio station.
In my opinion, vocally, the transitions at 48 seconds and 2:12 could use some whispered lyrics. Some of the chorus spots could use some ambient yelling or screams.