PaperKup

Yup. I hear it now, too. That extra hold gives it a heightened element of tension. Good call. I went back in and changed it. Not only that, but I added a new element that I think helps put the period at the end of the sentence, so to speak.
Thank you for your suggestion, I wish more people would do that!
Let me know what you think of the new version.
Take care.
V.

Hello PaperKup, First, thank you for listening and offering some feedback. But, I'm not entirely clear as to what you mean. Do you mean the final chord needs to be sustained longer, or do you mean the fadeout of the effects need to take longer before they go silent? or both? I'm totally open to suggestions on this. Ambient isn't my normal thing, so any input is good input.
Either way, thank you again for offering some critique. It's greatly appreciated.
Take care.
V.

00's in da place haha

thats a lovely comment from an artist that paints pictures with music thanks PaperKup

Hello PaperKup, appreciate your words of course and thank you for listening.....it means a lot my friend

PK whats good? Thank you for stopping by. Your feedback is highly valued. 80s? You caught that LOL. The 60s through 80s is my zone and I was strongly influenced by music stretching across many genres. Im happy you enjoyed what you heard.

Peace,

Mark

thankyou for your kind words PaperKup i put seriously hard work into writing more than anything although i do like playing keys and making beats and since i returned from a 10 month break, your an artist that as impressed me with your cinematic work, thanks again for your time, its appreciated

Hi, thanks for leaving some feedback, it's much appreciated as I find it helpful to get other peoples insights into what I've produced. I'm glad you liked the track and thanks again for leaving feedback.

Thanks so much - that is so sweet of you to say that - that was where I was aiming ;)

Thank you :)

Wow, that's excellent. I'll check it out. Glad you liked the track. Thanks.

Greetings PaperKup. Thank you for the support.

PK! The time youve taken out for this listen is valued big time. Thanks for sharing just how this one came across. The Sax Boss Slap Johnsons sound really seasoned this composition in grand fashion. Peace.

Mark

thankyou PaperKup its nice to see you again i will be checking you later, i almost fell out of love with music thats why i had a break, but i'm finally in a good place again so will be uploading more your time is appreciated too my friend

Thanks, glad you like it.

Thank you took a while for me to get it right but we were happy with the results

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

Thanx a lot really!
Appreciation with my fistbump,
Danke

Hi there, thanks so much mate. I got your email. I like the words. Sometimes what holds me back from the singing side of things (apart from embarrassment at hearing my own voice) is not having lyrics so I appreciate these. We'll see if I come back to this one or not, it's possible. Anyway, thanks again. Cheers Chris.

Thank you :)

I listened to your tracks. Very different ambient vibes. Your version is very relaxing and inspires different kinds of emotions for sure. Great job man

Glad u liked it ;)