Hi dimestop, nice and clever lyrics! Keep the tracks coming! I also checked the link from previous post, cool cinematic track and video you have there. Thanks for sharing.
sorry for the late reply bro, thankyou for the kind words, its nice to see you about and hopefully you have some new work yourself. again apology for missin' it, i hope your good as we begin the festive period
Hi glennwhite6504, nice track. The melody is also great. I'm starting to get a feel for your playing style, your tracks are all like one of a kind. Keep them coming!
Hello PaperKup, thank you my friend for the listen of course and thoughts, I guess my playing is somewhat different but believe me the guitars are all the same.....its all about the music my friend and I play pretty much what I feel.....just part of the family brother, let's keep playing.
Hi Flat2Forge, nice track and very very interesting vibe going on there. I like it. Guitar especially to my ears, sounds incredible. The trumpet goes nice in there too. Great combination and very well played
Hi TheFrenZ, great track to listen to. I was thinking Psytrance vibe. But for me, doesn't matter what genre coz it gets you movin'... Cool, like it a lot! Got loads of variations in there too, to keep you on your toes.
Hi DanMed, Goosebumps throughout and I didn't need to even check the lyrics, but I ended up looking after anyway... Great track! Vocal is especially potent!
Hi ValveDriver, I think it makes much more sense now and you have ended really nicely. I had to double check with myself, after your reply (nothing you said, I just have the tendency to presume I'm in trouble, prob from school. I got that lump in my throat - lol. But cool job! Thanks also for the mention. I don't know, I managed to pick up a midi guitar recently (I could have got it before - kicking myself), I'm loving it even with it's quirks. Maybe it's a solution for you as well?
I know what you mean about feeling like you're in trouble. I've been out of school for 30 something years and I still get that lump when I get called to the office at work.
I'll look into midi guitars and see if it's a good fit for me. Thanks for the suggestions. Both for the guitar and the track.
Take care.
V.
Hi ValveDriver, just to my ears, around 1:35, where it hits and there is also a thud. I would have liked to hear it a split second later. But that's me being extremely critical. I hope the feedback helps
Yup. I hear it now, too. That extra hold gives it a heightened element of tension. Good call. I went back in and changed it. Not only that, but I added a new element that I think helps put the period at the end of the sentence, so to speak.
Thank you for your suggestion, I wish more people would do that!
Let me know what you think of the new version.
Take care.
V.
Hi ValveDriver, I like it. Just only one element, the final "blow" to me at least needs a little more time. But I'm prob. on my own there lol. Nice job, it got me thinking.
Hello PaperKup, First, thank you for listening and offering some feedback. But, I'm not entirely clear as to what you mean. Do you mean the final chord needs to be sustained longer, or do you mean the fadeout of the effects need to take longer before they go silent? or both? I'm totally open to suggestions on this. Ambient isn't my normal thing, so any input is good input.
Either way, thank you again for offering some critique. It's greatly appreciated.
Take care.
V.
Why those hi hats make me feel like someone stretching cables in slow mo! I enjoyed this. I get the angry piano around 1:19 or so. Love it. The ending was well done as well, I was sad about that bit. I guess intentional. Also cool
Hi kingmt77, On another level springs to mind, very interesting, got also like 80's vibe in there. It "morphs". I enjoyed the listen, very different to the last one.
PK whats good? Thank you for stopping by. Your feedback is highly valued. 80s? You caught that LOL. The 60s through 80s is my zone and I was strongly influenced by music stretching across many genres. Im happy you enjoyed what you heard.
Hey dimestop, great track - it's honest, with intent... I think your voice is absolutely fine here, it was the focus for me. So it shines through the music. It fits well and a nice clever message put into it. Well done
thankyou for your kind words PaperKup i put seriously hard work into writing more than anything although i do like playing keys and making beats and since i returned from a 10 month break, your an artist that as impressed me with your cinematic work, thanks again for your time, its appreciated
Nice start to the track, flows nicely, all follows nice too. Drums are good, esp. the tom sounds and the constant kick is also fine. I like it. I also like the way it builds up throughout, quite gradual and interesting. The ending could be a bit different I feel personally like I missed something and then got disappointed. Saying that I still enjoyed your track very much. Well done
Hi DanMed, your best from what I've heard so far. It's really "bouncy" and energetic. Even if you are not dancing to it, it happens in the head anyway. Great job on this track!
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I'll look into midi guitars and see if it's a good fit for me. Thanks for the suggestions. Both for the guitar and the track.
Take care.
V.
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Thank you for your suggestion, I wish more people would do that!
Let me know what you think of the new version.
Take care.
V.
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Either way, thank you again for offering some critique. It's greatly appreciated.
Take care.
V.
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