srbrown7

Hi srbrown7 and thanx for your comment. Yea that would be great with more guitar but I don't have the guts to cut up Patricias work. But maybe If I'll find the right acapella with a 16 bars of silence it could happend.

Thanks for your comments.!

Yeah i know what your saying, what worries my amaturnes is if i did that i would probly end up heading in another direction lol!

For me on this one,i just wanted to keep it minimal.

As you know any track can be changed at any time, i normally bugger up tracks when i start to alter so i leave that to the pro's lol

Thanks for your comments mate!

***bb***

Thanks Steve :)

Thank you for listening, hints and feedback. I'm working hard on the finale version. :)

thanks for listening and giving feedback.

Thanx so much Steve my friend, much appreciated.
Peace, Love, Justice & Respect.
Vis . . . .

yeah, once started listening to them i remembered exactly who they were >.< haha, its been awhile!

thanx! lol, now i must listen to depeche mode cus im at a loss what he sounds like, lol,

thanks for the comment srbrown7, as to what you mention the break ..... because surely! Emphasize the progression.
What happens is that this song / melody / tune (I have not yet clear that is) I did not think about it much and that often happens to me, I start things and if I think a lot:
or change
or lost as a certain freshness
or not and just stay in the drawer

I will consider your opinion if I make a remix

lol.. To be honest.. I was drunk beyond imagination when i recorded this without any mastering and remembering me sloping over the keyboard and piano.. so.. I might do a second drift later on with more silenced drums.. Thank you for your comment tho..

oh ja Steve ..if U remember this was the first serious trial of mine which I uploaded here ..and the first which I senT to U too in email..and now when I look to Schelude it's unbelievable how fast time passed in looperman for me..
unbelievable how much I learned here from U all..found many good unseen friends from allover the world , and knew about the countries's cultures by their communities here..for example I have never known anybody from Australia before U..buT now when TV shows a sport match of Australia( as right now it's showing an I'm watching and answering U ),I think by myself hey Steve Brown's team..haha...and prefer Australia win ....Steve I wish someday humankind can controle the time...buT if that won'T make humans begin a new war for themselves....anyway thnx for your presence and attention to this trial again and best wishes my good friend.___Behnam

At first, thanks for listening and comment. I really appreciate it.
Well, I know nothing about music, I've never studied it, so... it's hard to me trying to understand what you mean with your comment.
I only "made" the song with the software. I have no more instruments/tools to make a better work.
I can't afford for music classes, my mom doesn't like that I "waste my time" with art.
I've tried to learn in internet, with no success. It's necessary a teacher.
I really thank you the criticism. I'll try to improve. I promise.
Thanks again for listening and comment.

That for the kind words. They are much appreciated!

TY man. Very kind.

Well the mixing part is my achilles heel ;`). So I preciate the compliment!

Hi Steve thanks for review. Its not Hiphop in the conventional sense, but I struggled to find a genre for this track. It would certainly fit into the Triphop genre if we had one. Regards Paul.

the voice was futurenalysis which I've now included in the title, I lost the download, but found it again, 'sorry for that' I will rework this track and work on the points indicated, your right 1.16 doesn't marry with the track, had a no brainer moment there, thank-you for your views they do mean something to me. thanks for the listen. Mickey

Thanks for that, yes I had fun with this tune as I could solo in it!

hey I'm listening your new track while answering U Steve . thnx alot for your encouragements as always and thnx for advice my worthwhile throughbred friend.and I've no doubT about my abilities Steve ..otherwise I wouldn't try to challenge those things U know .thnx for your presence,attention & perception Steve . best wishes.___Behnam

Wow i wish it was me playing,i do play guitar,but i've not played for months,so VST is easy option!

Thank you very much for your kind comments!

Peace all the way mate!

Hiya

Thanx for listening, Hope I've fixed the change now.

Aw ... I'm afraid I'd never be able to sing "Barracuda", Sir !! It's so difficult and elaborate ! I thank you a lot 'cause you made me discover it . So ice of you to have left a few words here :)
Cheers