Love this track. Its very clever, reminds me of early Elton John but with such a modern feel. As for genre dont worry. When bands in the 60's & 70's were making songs longer than 3 mimtes and 20 seconds they were interested in the story, not the "target audience"!
Wow - thank you!!
I had to listen to some early Elton John for comparison and I think you mean the piano? Well, I don't hear the similarity - my work is ridiculous in comparison but it's a great thing to say so thanks for that! I need a confidence boost for sure.
Really nice to see a good collaboration come of Bears initial dedication track. You have a nice timbre to your voice and well done with the lyrics.
Steve
I love your voice when you open up to sing the "chorus". I know its dubstep but is got a real 80's feel. It initially reminded me of the Tech Noir scene out of the first Terminator. As for TheDam I didn't see his comments against you but I have seen him rip into Behnam. I hope you take no notice of this fool and totally disregard him. You are a real talent and we are all trying our best with limited time and resources. Take care, Steve
Hi Behnam, another musical journey that is worth every second of listening. A piece that allows the imagination free to take it where ever the listener wants to go. Beautiful and haunting. Furthermore have more confidence and belief in yourself to ignore such comments as from "TheDam". He is either trying to be obnoxious or is plainly just an idiot.
Hi dear Steve ,glad to see U here my gentle friend ,your kindness and friendly encouragements has always made me feel better my friend , and also about ''the Dam''our new colleague , I should say He is a good guy too , He wrote me some message in which he has described has something happen wrong and he didn't mean to write than comment for me , any way We are still young and ''the Dam'' too has premission to mistake for a while and I wish We will see him suceeded in her music in future .Steve thanx alit for your presence here and taken time and worthwhile comment and as always my best wishes for U my dearf Friend.and in the last the same word (sincerely) that U know.hahaha___Behnam.
I was scanning the tracks with a glass of shiraz and wow, how nice is this! Pure relaxation. Can I come and join! Is it by a pool? Its freezing here so I'll imagine its warm there!
Relaxation, warmth and smiles was all I wanted, making this little thing .
Of course, join us Sir !
Mmmm, shiraz ... Did you bring the bottle ? ;)
Thx for your nice words, Steve,
Bises
Love the piano melody. Very warming. Nicely backed by staccato brass and string bass. I would just check your levels as brass and piano are fighting for headroom before the portamento lead comes in. Maybe a compression setting pushing everything at the same dB. I would just go for a bit more volume contrast. Otherwise a really nice track
I love the bouncing mini melodies surrounding the core mellotron sounding chords. I also used Stephanie Kays Hide acapella so I was very interested to hear how you adapted it. Great spacial effects used with tight centred presentations. Nice work.
Thank you very much for the detailed assessment. I really appreciate folks who break it down for me! I'm on SoundCloud if you would like to connect on there...
Wow, very professional let alone a top accompaniment for an acapella. Would like to have heard some slightly heavier drumming in the second chorus onwards just to lend to building the mood as you are doing with the guitars. Love it all the same.
Really like your take on this voice clip. I used it too so I was intrigued how you approach it. The phone ringing!Of course, damn why didn't I think of that, so obvious. Nice symphonic chords and arpeggios. Well done.
Great track. Massages the ears. Very clean and well mastered. Maximums is good if you're not looking for a lot of dynamic range. Reminds me of juventa, if you've heard of him? Thanks for sharing
Hello Steve
thanks for the feedback. I've just listened to a few of your tracks and there's a really nice feel to them - a kind of funky chill ! ? I spend more time on soundcloud at the moment so look me up ...
To take on such an iconic song and cover it so well is a real credit to your talent. Your voice is a pleasure to the ears, great tone, control and clarity. I would love to hear you cover U2's "One". Listening to this made me think of Mary J Blidge's duet. You have the same strength in voice. Thanks again for brining this site such tremendous talent.
Hi Sir ! Thanks to honour me by your comment !
I searched on the web but didn't find a version where Mary J Blidge sings it on her own (oh no ... I ain't got her vocal skills !) . Do you know one ? I would indeed be interested in doing a more R'n'B cover of this legendary song .
Thanks to YOU and all the loopies for the warm and friendly welcome you give to my stuff ... !
My heart smiles at you all with love, respect and gratefulness .
Thx again srbrown7,
peace,
Janis :)
This is great. Love the asian feel. I have a tune called Tokyo I've got in the too hard basket but this has given me inspiration. Percussion is fantatic and really well mixed. Thanks for another great track
Another fantastic landscape of sound and mood. Your music is such a kaleidoscope of instruments and melodies that is a journey well worth taking. Thanks again for such a heart felt piece.
thank you my dear friend, Mr.Brown , I should appreciate you because of your kind words in commenting on my music trials , I'm learning here as I've told you & you know , and I'm really proud to read your possitive comments about my music trials . Best wishes & regards again & here too.
Thank you srbrown7. Glad you like it. Loops make for a good source of music if one can't play regular instruments. However, I am inclined to believe that my laptop keyboard is or has become a regular instrument. LOL Thanks for the review.
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Well done
I had to listen to some early Elton John for comparison and I think you mean the piano? Well, I don't hear the similarity - my work is ridiculous in comparison but it's a great thing to say so thanks for that! I need a confidence boost for sure.
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Of course, join us Sir !
Mmmm, shiraz ... Did you bring the bottle ? ;)
Thx for your nice words, Steve,
Bises
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Its such a great theraputic tool!
thank you so much for your kind comments!
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thanks for the feedback. I've just listened to a few of your tracks and there's a really nice feel to them - a kind of funky chill ! ? I spend more time on soundcloud at the moment so look me up ...
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I searched on the web but didn't find a version where Mary J Blidge sings it on her own (oh no ... I ain't got her vocal skills !) . Do you know one ? I would indeed be interested in doing a more R'n'B cover of this legendary song .
Thanks to YOU and all the loopies for the warm and friendly welcome you give to my stuff ... !
My heart smiles at you all with love, respect and gratefulness .
Thx again srbrown7,
peace,
Janis :)
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