I really like your singing style, relaxed and whimsical and you have good tone. Just a few parts your pitch was a touch flat but that can be due to the environment you're recording in or nerves! I am currently working on a piece where I just talk into a vocoder and I still get nerves. Takes courage to put yourself out there so keep it up. Agree with Mrwolf. We could help with the accompaniment if you put out an acapella. Thanks for sharing!
Cheers, I know there is a big pitch stuff up at the start lol but I keep trying to re-record it and it just keeps coming out the same. Think I will work on my vocals a bit and do the acapella. I generally like the lyric writing side the most and I am only starting at the vocals and mixing side.
Very nice feel and again the considered use of natural instruments. Could I make one suggestion that you drop the piano melody when your Pan Flute (i am guessing) comes in? Its just they seem to clash at times and I am fighting to hear them independently? The bass piano notes supports the flute nicely.
Regards + my appologize for such a late replying Mr.Brown .
+ special thank for your excellent paying attention & your gentle & proper hint about clash point which I'm agree about it with you . such a weak point is one of any experimental & selflearner musicians like me , & here in virtual world I'm sharing my trials with musician like you to learn more & improve my data about music . & obviously I'll be glad to know what should I do , solve such clash in this music & I'll be glad to know your Idea about how to solve this problem in it .
thank you for taking time & listen & writing such a usefull comment Mr.Brown .
Nice, very nice. There is so much talent out there in the world and I am so glad what's being posted is more than "put your hands in the air"!!! Keep up the good work
A lot work I can hear and its a real journey. Listening it online though the first 2 sections when your bass and guitars come in with the choir are coming through a bit "muddy", the bass seems a bit booming. Where as the rest has good clarity and crispness. I love this type of song so rarely attempted these days. Regards Steve
This is super. Wow, absolutely love the on and off key melodies, so subtle and poignant. Beautiful traditional instruments blended with electronics. A real work of art. WIll add this to my playlist!
I'm so glad to reading some comments about my music trials from such man like you Mr Brown .
& obviously I would be real happy to read such words about this track from you.
& uummmm of course & untold I know I must learn more & more & Improve my music peception & congnition . & I'm thankfull & want to appreciate you for taking the time to listening & commenting to one of my music trials .
Try some stereo separation or pan instruments in opposition. Have individual notes bounce left then right then centre. Helps with musical texture whilst running repetitions
Really like this. Nice major/minor chord chorus versus the minors in the verse. Good pop beat. Perhaps a bit a little less reverb or less lower harmony on the verse vocals, a bit muddy I think. You're got a good voice so make it have more individual presence. Chorus voice effects great. Look forward to the finished product. Real commercial potential. Played it 8 times now!
Excellent sound and feel. Love the drums. Would have like to hear you drop to a d minor as apposed going back from f to a minor each time. I know it's a typical progression but it's one I love. Also dig the sentiment. Been there myself. Thanks for sharing
thank you man, and tahnks for th xtra chord progression. I was after to that painful with a little sign of relief sound but tried to keep it intense and involved. Really appreciate the feedback. Thank you
Amazing talent to find on this site. Love the song from a movie that brought me to tears at the end of the penance scene. Your rendition made me feel that way again. Excellent singing in tone, pitch, vibrato...the works
I blush when I read your words, Sir, for they come from a true musician whose listening is undoubtedly very pointed .
Nice to meet you,
Thank you very much for your comment which honours me a lot .
Best,
Janis
A great beginning of a what could be a top song. You have a great voice. Bring it front and centre, a bit too much treble, just needs a little warmth (mid tones). Agree with previous comment, leads a lead section. Loved listening to it!!
Nice Track. Would love to have some spanish woman speaking seductively about the ocean in the pauses! Try some stereo separation on the strings as its nice touch to broaden the sound. Really enjoyed it.
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+ special thank for your excellent paying attention & your gentle & proper hint about clash point which I'm agree about it with you . such a weak point is one of any experimental & selflearner musicians like me , & here in virtual world I'm sharing my trials with musician like you to learn more & improve my data about music . & obviously I'll be glad to know what should I do , solve such clash in this music & I'll be glad to know your Idea about how to solve this problem in it .
thank you for taking time & listen & writing such a usefull comment Mr.Brown .
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& obviously I would be real happy to read such words about this track from you.
& uummmm of course & untold I know I must learn more & more & Improve my music peception & congnition . & I'm thankfull & want to appreciate you for taking the time to listening & commenting to one of my music trials .
great regards
__BehnaM
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Nice to meet you,
Thank you very much for your comment which honours me a lot .
Best,
Janis
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