Very nice, lovely beat, The only tiny issues I can hear and it is tiny, is 1 of the piano loops seems slightly outside of the mix, maybe a lil reverb on that loop would help it sound more integrated :). again just a thought :)
Very nice sound great use of delay and vocal filters, The drums are nice and understated, maybe some light use of hats in the 2nd part would really sound nice, but thats just my preference certainly not a critisim :)
thanks bro any kind tips are welcomed lol so dont worry about that ! i'll try to incorporate some hats in my upcoming projects cuz in my cill out songs i realized none of them as hats lol
No bad m8, put some compression on that main bass drum as its too forward in the mix, the vox need bringing into the mix, when laying down vocals make sure they work with the song not against it, at the mo they sound like an after thought,
Think about re recording them,as they sound like you were wispering and not putting your all into em.
Vocals will make or break a song, sing with conviction :)
I am a big Steaem punk fan, even got a leather tophat with goggles!! it has a lovely transition to the fuller sound. One thing for me is an elevated drum pattern for the Chorus would really take it to the next level, Also a tiny bit more variation in the velocitys of the string stabs would really give them life!!:)
Leather tophat with goggles rock.. Thank you for the review tho even tho i realized i made a huge mistake(read previous posts), and drumpattern, well, ill see what i can do sinse this piece isnt supposed to have any drums at all in it from the first place.. lol.
Anyways.. Ill make sure to upload the one that was "intended" from start to make this tune some sort of justice...
This is lovely, right up my street, the atmosphere plays out really nicely with the intelligent use of reverb.
If you decide you want the guitars to sound more natural as their i one note to me which sounds slightly out, give me a holla and ill happily lay em down for you :)
Thank you for the nice comment and glad you liked it..
I suppose you mean the note in the beginning that goes of with a "twang" and sounds like i broke a nail in the process.. i actually left it there to make it more realistic. lol..
Making music more alive is not to perfect it in my opinion, its those small flaws that makes the tune, but if you would like, i can see if i can remove the current guitarr, and you might have a go at it in any way you want.. would be fun.. And thanks yet again..///Dec
thanks for the listen and comment, drums are my least favourite part, always struggle with them so its nice to know ppl like em, hooky bass lines are even harder LOL.
Really like this production is slick, I agree with the others here about the bass some consistency there would take it to the level it needs, and give it a nice flow.
Possibly a bridge where the vocals take over for a bar or 2 would break it up nicely
The "ray gun" sounds (sorry its the only way I can descripe it lol) delay seems to throw it out of time for a second, but again these are only my thoughts :0
Hey MrC my friend thanx so much for such a lovely & positive review. I really appreciate it.
Yup it was a beautiful orchard that deserved to be listened to.
Peace, Love & Justice mate.
Vis
Im not familiar with Garage band but from what you say, it seems like its struggling in the mixdown, check to see if their are any settings for Exporting or mixdown, if so see what bit rate its using and increase it, What sound card are you using?
Well all my tracks end up distorted…after I export them to iTunes (I make all of my tracks on GarageBand with loops from this site…so clearly not the best quality) but I've tried uploading a song by selecting the GarageBand file…but it never works. When I make the track it sounds fine (otherwise I wouldn't make it ;p)
Hi, I really like the overall feel here, there are one of 2 timing issues, but its def on its way, I cant get the bass line outta my head which is always a good sign :)
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Think about re recording them,as they sound like you were wispering and not putting your all into em.
Vocals will make or break a song, sing with conviction :)
Just my 2 cents worth.
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Anyways.. Ill make sure to upload the one that was "intended" from start to make this tune some sort of justice...
Thank you again ///Dec
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If you decide you want the guitars to sound more natural as their i one note to me which sounds slightly out, give me a holla and ill happily lay em down for you :)
I suppose you mean the note in the beginning that goes of with a "twang" and sounds like i broke a nail in the process.. i actually left it there to make it more realistic. lol..
Making music more alive is not to perfect it in my opinion, its those small flaws that makes the tune, but if you would like, i can see if i can remove the current guitarr, and you might have a go at it in any way you want.. would be fun.. And thanks yet again..///Dec
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only suggestion I would have to make is I feel it needs a hooky bass line to compliment the main synth,
But maybe for this Genre its not needed, :)
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Possibly a bridge where the vocals take over for a bar or 2 would break it up nicely
The "ray gun" sounds (sorry its the only way I can descripe it lol) delay seems to throw it out of time for a second, but again these are only my thoughts :0
very nice work sir!
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Yup it was a beautiful orchard that deserved to be listened to.
Peace, Love & Justice mate.
Vis
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Im liking the vibe here, I had a Bass line running through my head as I was listening, Do you mind if I lay one down on it?
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